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.
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There he comes
Sword in hand
No, it’s not a sword
There he comes
With his bow and arrows
They are not arrows
Nor a bow
It’s a bouquet
Of beautiful red roses
Wrong again
It is a bunch of grass
For the goat he keeps
In his back yard
But he’s a nice man…
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I am taking part in Flash 55 Friday sponsored by Mr. G Man
28 comments:
Poleeeee!!!!
Hey there!
Great 55 Friday. You're simply great, u deserve that huge bouquet of fres roses. Thx for sharing dear.
No time for losers anymore!!
oH Carla that's so sweet of you... YEs no time for losers...
But, who said I was?
A simple NICE one man is so much better than a Prince Charming...
;-)
Oh Dulce, my very first thought upon reading these 55 was this:
She is SO sweet. He IS her Knight in Shining Armor, with weapons at the ready.
His weapons are his love for animals entrusted to him, his love of (probably) nature, of God, his steadfastness, his faithfulness, his dependability, his tenderness, his wisdom, his love for HER No Matter What.
And...he knows she loves HIM, even though that he is not Don Juan, or Eric the Red.
For these are the attributes which REALLY matter to this girl. And she loves him dearly.
And just maybe...just it might be...her name is Dulce!
♥ ♥
Such a beautiful 55. A real bouquet indeed.
smiles. he is a nice man...and i am glad that counts for something...nice 55.
:) yah! for the nice man! i love this one also
keeps a smile on the face,
what a nice way about things :))
Dulce dear beautiful 55 and yes you truly deserve the roses. Hugs x
how mistaken we are so often. Judging so quickly.
I dont really care for roses so the grass for his goat I find more attractive.
BTW, goat milk with brandy...divine! a little secret of my native country Colombia
Loved this wee 55. A closer look sometimes gives the REAL picture which we always tend to miss while fantasising.
Joy always,
Susan
Now this 55er will be hard to surpass, a most enchanting and endearing love poem, and I so love what Steveroni wrote that in itself is a short poem or a tender 55er.
You do have a way of magically summoning the spirit- the essence of love.
Cheers,
Joanny
haven't even thought of what to write yet..
a Nice man who likes goats. Why do I find that so disturbing?
The anticipation of what comes your way...and then, grass. Pffft. Yes, that's okay, he tends his flock which makes him a NICE Man!!!
Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!
Have a super weekend.
Me ha gustado. Es muy original, y se pueden sacar muchos significados de ella.
Un beso.
Yah!!!! this is best...made me smile...
Awww Dulce...
A poem about Stevarino?
He'll LOVE it!
I Love your 55 My Dear
A bit different from you.
Thank you so much for this little piece of JOY!
You Rock Baby!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
A poem about Stevarino?
Oh G-Man...you naughty- LOL
yes, as a matter of fact he could be exactly it... for is such a NICE man!
Dulce, this is so simple and so sweet. A very humble and down-to-earth 55... from a sweet sweet mind... to hearts waiting to receive.
Big hugs,
Nevine
this is fantastic - a bunch of grass - sometimes a bunch of grass tells more than 100 red roses…don't you think?
Boy, somebody needs new glasses! (LOL!)
Neat 55... have a great weekend!
what a fabulous 55, lady - but then, that's just to be expected from you, lady dulce!!! :)
This is a fascinating poem, Dulce...that man seems so interesting, such a wonderful character. A charming 55 :)
I really love Just_because_today's comment.
Assumptions lead us to dark places.
You've got me chewing,
with a smile.
Thanks.
Oh dear, a knight in shining gum boots. This made me giggle. Have a great weekend.
My 55 is here.
Hola bonita:)
Ando un poco perdida por acá y te extrañaba:(
Es precioso esto y lo comento con tu comentario porque estoy totalmente de acuerdo:
A simple NICE one man is so much better than a Prince Charming...
Buen Finde!! y buena vida!!
Un fuerte abrazo.
hmmm i ask myself what Angeles
is saying , well i will never
know .
Hola = maybe hallo ,
bonita = sure the best !!
;-)
Any poem which can mention a goat is sheer brilliance in my eyes!!
he sure does sound nice, bringing all that grass for his goats!
true feelings is golden or priceless, it does not matter what he brings.
witty and fun 55.
Happy Belated Friday!
my 55
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