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.Read my mind
Read me now
Now that it’s not poisoned
By intruders of any kind
Read me
For this is my mind’s view of you
Though you may be tired
Of hearing my sweet accolade
I no longer obsess
Over your inner beauty
Or mine
Your sensuality
And mine
Your talent your wisdom
Or mine
Or how it will be
Next time we get to meet
Read me now
Now that I so easily accept
What is so wonderful about my life today
Just for knowing you
For knowing
Your heart plus mine
Is one.
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With this poem I 'm taking part in >>One Shot Wednesday
30 comments:
That's really lovely. I read you all the time as you probably know. Thanks for sharing.
i like the invitation to read you...now that things have changed...wonder if there are those i need to say the same...
Nice piece. I liked the final lines - a new twist on the old 'two hearts beat as one' idea.
Profound...and SO sweet!
♥
Tender words.
I feel so much past in this...A letting go of the past...Accepting whatever the future offers...That one'ness and the feelings that come along with getting to that point....I FEEL you Dulce...I so feel this...
I LOVE this! One of the best I've read lately--so meaningful to me. Makes me feel like I need to cut out all the crud and concentrate on my relationship(s).
El hoy es lo verdaderamente importante...
Muchos besos.
Oh sweet Dulce i love reading you and thanks for inviting us in to sail with you along this self discovery or love and sensuality, lovely one-shot dear x :)
Ah, dear Dulce, this sounds like nirvana! From the senses to the higher form of existence. I am reading you through your words dear sweetest and I am thoroughly getting drenched in the joy and delight!
Joy always dearest,
Susan
oh so nice.... and the picture says to me....are you really going to leave after that..... *sighs*
I just went "Ahhh..." reading this poem, Dulce. It was like intruding on a most beautiful private moment between two who have a meeting of minds and hearts - which is what I always think love is. Beautiful!
Always beautiful..
Always Perfect...
hmmmmm...again, dear dulce, still again, as though you've been sneaking 'round in my own little thought-box over here - your words beautifully said and as if from my own heart - just magnificent!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amiga...¡Casi muero de ternura!
Beautiful, enticing poem, Dulce. Opening one's mind and one's soul to another...truly the essence of love. Your last stanza (as it so often is) is perfect. The joining of hearts and bodies. Profound, sensual and marvellous.
Reading the unedited, uncensored mind--there's a kind of purity in that.
i like the invitation to read - for a special limited moment - in a place of vulnerability
if it only would be easier to read in other people's minds - sometimes there are just words needed
Wonderful sentiment well expressed. - Bill
Comment #2--In a hurry this morning.
Image...yesss, anybody can read her mind. It is whatever I wish it to be thinking. Fits exactly the theme.
Read me now!
Usually for me, one plus one equals three. But your "One plus one equals ONE". Dulce, what you are writing...THAT is L O V E!
Dulce, that was absolutely beautiful. Every single word was just delicious! And oh, those last three lines. Your heart plus mine... is also One! ;-)
Big hugs, Sweetest!
Nevine
Love the invitation to read, just lovely.
Dulce,
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It's like a private moment. I want to see more but I don't want to intrude.
Thanks Dulce for this beautiful post for One Shot
Moon smiles
powerful...and an awesome place to be at.....your poems Dulce...always touch a part of me....you write from the heart..☺
Te leo.... y cada vez me engancho más a tu lectura.
Un fuerte abrazo, amiga!!!
still reading...what a wonderful poem...and i sure did read you..i like what moondust said about a private moment...it was good..cheers pete
Well said, Dulce..
I like the 'read me now' the best.. after all, now is the only time we know of.. isn't it? The only time when reader and writer (and their work) form that bond of oneness...
Yes, I read you now!
"Now that I so easily accept
What is so wonderful about my life today"
what a sweet spot that is!
Your words make readers swoon , can you really get any better then this? I wonder what next you will write, always a magical place to come and spend time at. You keep us guessing, and coming back to read more.
Joanny
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