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Wednesday, September 8

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Read my mind

Read me now

Now that it’s not poisoned
By intruders of any kind

Read me

For this is my mind’s view of you
Though you may be tired
Of hearing my sweet accolade

I no longer obsess
Over your inner beauty
Or mine
Your sensuality
And mine
Your talent your wisdom
Or mine

Or how it will be
Next time we get to meet

Read me now

Now that I so easily accept
What is so wonderful about my life today

Just for knowing you

For knowing
Your heart plus mine
Is one.

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With this poem I 'm taking part in >>One Shot Wednesday

30 comments:

Anonymous said...

That's really lovely. I read you all the time as you probably know. Thanks for sharing.

Brian Miller said...

i like the invitation to read you...now that things have changed...wonder if there are those i need to say the same...

Bubba said...

Nice piece. I liked the final lines - a new twist on the old 'two hearts beat as one' idea.

steveroni said...

Profound...and SO sweet!

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Tender words.

JStar said...

I feel so much past in this...A letting go of the past...Accepting whatever the future offers...That one'ness and the feelings that come along with getting to that point....I FEEL you Dulce...I so feel this...

Dr. Cheryl Carvajal said...

I LOVE this! One of the best I've read lately--so meaningful to me. Makes me feel like I need to cut out all the crud and concentrate on my relationship(s).

Adelina said...

El hoy es lo verdaderamente importante...

Muchos besos.

Wild Rose said...

Oh sweet Dulce i love reading you and thanks for inviting us in to sail with you along this self discovery or love and sensuality, lovely one-shot dear x :)

S. Susan Deborah said...

Ah, dear Dulce, this sounds like nirvana! From the senses to the higher form of existence. I am reading you through your words dear sweetest and I am thoroughly getting drenched in the joy and delight!

Joy always dearest,
Susan

Anonymous said...

oh so nice.... and the picture says to me....are you really going to leave after that..... *sighs*

TALON said...

I just went "Ahhh..." reading this poem, Dulce. It was like intruding on a most beautiful private moment between two who have a meeting of minds and hearts - which is what I always think love is. Beautiful!

G-Man said...

Always beautiful..
Always Perfect...

GYPSYWOMAN said...

hmmmmm...again, dear dulce, still again, as though you've been sneaking 'round in my own little thought-box over here - your words beautifully said and as if from my own heart - just magnificent!

Lu Ann said...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amiga...¡Casi muero de ternura!

Sam Liu said...

Beautiful, enticing poem, Dulce. Opening one's mind and one's soul to another...truly the essence of love. Your last stanza (as it so often is) is perfect. The joining of hearts and bodies. Profound, sensual and marvellous.

Timoteo said...

Reading the unedited, uncensored mind--there's a kind of purity in that.

Claudia said...

i like the invitation to read - for a special limited moment - in a place of vulnerability
if it only would be easier to read in other people's minds - sometimes there are just words needed

Bill Cook said...

Wonderful sentiment well expressed. - Bill

steveroni said...

Comment #2--In a hurry this morning.

Image...yesss, anybody can read her mind. It is whatever I wish it to be thinking. Fits exactly the theme.

Read me now!

Usually for me, one plus one equals three. But your "One plus one equals ONE". Dulce, what you are writing...THAT is L O V E!

Nevine Sultan said...

Dulce, that was absolutely beautiful. Every single word was just delicious! And oh, those last three lines. Your heart plus mine... is also One! ;-)

Big hugs, Sweetest!
Nevine

SuziCate said...

Love the invitation to read, just lovely.

WOW said...

Dulce,
Sorry to post this in your comments, but I wasn't able to find an email address for you here on your blog or on your profile.

You and your blog have been nominated by Susan Deborah for consideration as a Blogger of Note (BON) at Words of Wisdom (WOW). Words of Wisdom is a place for bloggers (women and men) who enjoy reading and writing great content to find each other. Susan Deborah feels that you represent just this type of "blogger of substance". If you would like to be highlighted as a BON at WOW, please send an email to ourwordsofwisdom@gmail.com and submit links to three of your favorite/best posts for consideration.

To learn more, please visit Words of Wisdom (ourwisdomofwords.blogspot.com) and click on the What is WOW and Blogger of Note links.

Thank you,

Pam and Sandy
WOW Founders

moondustwriter said...

It's like a private moment. I want to see more but I don't want to intrude.

Thanks Dulce for this beautiful post for One Shot

Moon smiles

Nikki (Sarah) said...

powerful...and an awesome place to be at.....your poems Dulce...always touch a part of me....you write from the heart..☺

SILVIA said...

Te leo.... y cada vez me engancho más a tu lectura.
Un fuerte abrazo, amiga!!!

Marshy said...

still reading...what a wonderful poem...and i sure did read you..i like what moondust said about a private moment...it was good..cheers pete

Anonymous said...

Well said, Dulce..
I like the 'read me now' the best.. after all, now is the only time we know of.. isn't it? The only time when reader and writer (and their work) form that bond of oneness...
Yes, I read you now!

Lisa Ursu said...

"Now that I so easily accept
What is so wonderful about my life today"
what a sweet spot that is!

joanna said...

Your words make readers swoon , can you really get any better then this? I wonder what next you will write, always a magical place to come and spend time at. You keep us guessing, and coming back to read more.

Joanny