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Saturday, December 4

Love love Love





Love, love
Love of mine
How can I shut my mouth
Love sweet love
Not to tell you
Love love
So tender
Why do I cry
This need 
of you and me
Holding each other
Until we die
....

9 comments:

S. Susan Deborah said...

Sometimes the most simple verses are the most tender and sweet, like this one. Dulce, I loved this piece for its brevity and depth.

Love and smiles always.

Joy and more joy,
Susan

Brian Miller said...

ah what a beautiful love to have and to hold until that day...if only more lasted as long...

steveroni said...

My 3rd attempt: this IS getting old, I just wanted to say I believe most gardens hold secrets, and use beauty of color, sweetest scent, and variety, to camouflage, to hide what they 'know'.

Love the garden painting!

This 'short-and-sweetest' poem is either just that, a work of simple beauty, or words of careful thoughtfulness for someone very special (and very lucky--grin!).

Glad your hiatus was short-lived. Blog-world is not the same without the 'regular old Peeps'! (Look who's talking!!!!)

Just HAD to drop by and say Hi!
Steve E

Carrie Van Horn said...

It is what makes the world go around, and what a billion songs have been written about...we long for it from the time we are a baby...and your poems flow like a river with it's blessings and it's pain....this love you have is worth holding....and you tell of it beautifully Dulce.
:-)

Nikki (Sarah) said...

there's a sweet rest in this...in loving and being loved means soo much and fills all those places inside. Have a great weekend Dulce....

Don Carlo said...

I, Carlo, love those heaven lips, white teeth, biting some poor man's heart Dolce. It is the keenest avatar I have yet viewed.

Your poem simplicity so keen, meaning is a bit clouded (for me). Wish I had your email before now instead of while you are so passionate in love with someone

Did you read me wrote "I like you?" You are such a nice follower I should be more careful, or you will go away. Please don't.
C

Jhon Baker said...

simple, wandering - this one is after my own heart.

June_Butterfly said...

The simplest words thus say it all.For love is a truly simple.It is only us humans that makes it complicated.

Love the pic too,Dulce.Beautiful.

aguja said...

A truly beautiful love poem.