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Thursday, July 22

BRAINWORK


In nobody’s domain

She runs and walks in circles

Wasted attempt to focus

Upon just what she sees.


She loses control

And the power of her mind

Gives her these ever

Exasperating thoughts,

Undesired presents

From a shattered heart.


Lies on the wet sand

Trying to find answers

Up in the sky

Or at least, blankness

Absolute obliviousness.


The insistent,

Exhausting brainwork

Makes her give up,

So tears flow from her eyes

And groans from her mouth…


A moment relief materializes.



12 comments:

steveroni said...

Do not forget to breathe! it says so in your Header, Dulce. Remember?

And please do not let the girl drown in her various and vicarious thoughts
...and to cry is good, except when it arises out of our own frustration,
our own misgivings, our own denial of the whisperings from "out there somewhere"...

Here is Steve again sounding like a preacher...which he is N O T !!!

Choose your domain, stick with it, enjoy it, look for the most to come of it. By any name, it will be always and ever YOUR domain.

Again, thank you for helping me so well, Canary-Girl!
Besos!

steveroni said...

Hey, not fair--grin! I ask for girl not to drown--now she is GONE! And YOU LET HER SLIP INTO THE SEA???? I should have copied her in the beginning, that WAS an exquisite picture.

Sorry about two-dipping.

JStar said...

Tears refresh, when there is too much dissapoint...tired of being sick and tired...tired of thinking...Crying it out makes you feel better

Isha Ethera said...

that was a perfect piece. I like it alot.

Maha said...

You have the ability to perfectly portray what goes in a woman's heart. Absolutely beautiful!

Nevine Sultan said...

Dulce, it is when we try to find answers that we sometimes fail. They evade us the harder we search for them. But somewhere in the blankness and obliviousness, we find a spark... a sparkle... an intimation... and that is when that "moment" happens.

I will keep your words in mind as I search for answers to the questions that ever haunt me.

Sweet kisses,
Nevine

Brian Miller said...

when all else fails...tears. there are some answers we will never recieve...but it does not make it any easier...

Lu Ann said...

Trying to find the answers.
Sometimes... I think that looking out for answers is a thing that hurts a woman more than anything.

Up in the sky... well I´ve found out that in the end... it is exactly where I find the enough calm as to realize that some questions just dont need to be answered yet.


:) I get to like you more as I read you too :)

flaubert said...

now that is a beautiful poem :)
Pamela

S. Susan Deborah said...

In that moment lies the answers and eternity.

I am glad for that moment.

Joy always,
Susan

Jessie said...

tears can clear the mind. just like the ocean waves that roll onto the sand--each takes away the top layer of the disturbance.

beautiful poem dear Dulce,

smiles,

aysegul said...

oh my god.. how ı come here..

..won-der-ful !!

love you >xoxo