Dulce, your poetry is always so sensuous and captivating. I can completely relate to this poem. I have been at that place many times, where he must wait until I am open to our place together again. Thank you for sharing it. :-)
so soft sweet nd gentle calling yet not insisting falling yet not inviting rising to your distance like a tiered line that is missing a word and a full stop.
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Dulce, your poetry is always so sensuous and captivating. I can completely relate to this poem. I have been at that place many times, where he must wait until I am open to our place together again. Thank you for sharing it.
:-)
smiles. love the feel of this...and if he is a good man, he will wait until the time is right...
¡Ay como echaba yo de menos tus poemas! Como siempre, hermosos verso. Un besazo cielo!!!
I completely agree with Brian. If he loves you, he will wait.
I second Brian.
I kept on reading it over and over again. It has this soft sad beautiful tone about it
beautiful style,
so precious to wait and be waited...
the image is stunning!
¡Ayy!! ¡Oye! me asombra esa habilidad de hacer de lo cotidiano una poesía entera.
:)
How well the human essence is captured here. Not every time IS the time and when IT IS the time, it happens.
Dulce, lovely as ever :) I wish the man is sensible enough to wait and savour it bit by bit.
Joy always,
Susan
so soft
sweet nd gentle
calling yet not insisting
falling yet not inviting
rising
to your distance
like a tiered line
that is missing a word
and a full stop.
space is sometimes all we need to come closer..
If the man has been reading your sweeter poetry for all this time--he will wait...
Opening words of Song:
"If it takes forever I will wait for you...."
And I'm betting he will!
Love ya, Spanish-Girl.
Take Care
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