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Monday, January 3

Feather Kiss

 
It’s the colour 
of my smile
In a dream of 
softened light
...


...
It’s feathers

Silky

So gentle and smooth

Soothing 

Subtly stroking my chin
My cheeks, then 

My lips

And I wake up
To find you here

Caressing me there

With your mild
Sweet
Fingertips.

..........

16 comments:

Bubba said...

Sweet and soft, gentle and romantic. Very nice, Dulce!

Tabitha.Montgomery said...

Damn.

Brian Miller said...

whew...do i ever have to fully wake up from that?

Laura said...

sensual beauty! Thanks for all your kind comments on my blog...I'm adding you to my blog roll...you are a shiny star:)

Kay said...

oh, Dulce, although so sensual... can't help but place myself in the imagery and picture myself waking up swatting... haha

Happy New Year

Jessie said...

your writing is as sweet and soft as i remember it.
thank you for your nice comment. i hope your son had a delightful Christmas and your New Year is filled with love, hope, and everything that makes you happy!

warm smiles and a hug,

Lisa Ursu said...

Happy New Year Dulce!

Soft, floating piece.
Nice place to land today Dulce.

aguja said...

Just ... beautiful ... is all I can say.

steven said...

i'm thinking of sugared figs, yes ! steven

Louise said...

Very romantic and sensuous poem - loved it! I've added you to my blog roll - I need a bit of sweetness :)

Ileana said...

Primita, this one is like foreplay. Nicely written, Srta. Erotica! ;)

steveroni said...

Ahhhh! My first follower! Exciting, this blogging. Love the silky feathers--and lips. And your writing makes tingling fingertips...

Caroline said...

Ohhhhhh....how delicious...

Shadow said...

bliss......

A Plain Observer said...

sensual...romantic. That moment...that moment is romance, love.

RNSANE said...

That is lovely. I used to torment my sweetheart with the light stroke of a hair. It was amusing to see him swat or wrinkle his nose, then to have him come awake and realize it was just me. He never got angry, though. I just wanted him awake and paying attention to me. Mmmmmm, you retrieved nice memories for me.