 |
| LARVA Oil On Canvas |
I go unnoticed
Among indefinite crowds
Avoiding the encounter
Of four sad eyes.
For you and your idea
Won’t listen
I go unseen
Unheard
Crying out in the
Suffocating
dumb dream
Suffocating
dumb dream
And I go talking
The unspeakable
To the fools
The unknown
Conversations interrupted
By void,
unrelated dialogues.
13 comments:
Having something completely relevant to say whilst another someone not responding with little interest or not at all. They, caring more about 'whatever' else is on their mind.
..been there my dear twin!!
Nice write! :)
~hugs
~Calli
So well you got it - no wonder you ARE my dearest Twin
Thank you for always being there...
Hugs back
:)
Going unseen and unheard - especially by one who is supposed to be close to you - is a terrible thing. But you have illustrated the point so beautifully!
shall we make that triplets, dear ladies, for it is my own heart as well about which you speak so beautifully!
Somebody once said all has already been written...
guess so.
But The way you say it is what makes it different- nothing much is said, nothing much is not alike- but every single one has a heart and their way with words... I am so glad to share the same feeling my own way...
Sweet, Sweet ladies, thank you!
Enjoyed…. How often this happens. Wonderfully said.
dang this is sharp dulce...you and your idea wont listen...lost in the void conversations...love it...and great pic too!
Sometimes you feel like you are talking to the wind...only the wind probably is a better listener before it scatters your words to the far corners of the globe. There is nothing worse, I think, than to have one you love, or even, one you don't love, fail to listen to what you are saying to them.
Dulce, I believe that sometimes the listener doesn't hear, for fear of the truth, knowledge that a change, maybe a complete psychic one, must be made...in order to fulfill a goal.
Too bad we are human. Some great comments here. Please forgive if mine doesn't make sense. Blame it on lack of sleep, rough week! REALLY!
PEACE! Blah blah blah--grin!
like an echo, like a reflection in a mirror, this rings close to heart.
boy can i relate to this...
nicely done!
- Sy
'...you and your idea won't listen.'
First time I've seen an idea! Great thanks.
Sweet Dulce:
Your words echo about the chamber of many peoples hearts and come tumbling out on the paper in your own sweet and sage style, for many souls experience this, but few can put it so eloquently in words like you have done here. Now that is a heart of a poet.
joanny
Post a Comment