Fuera mi ventana... me invita a recrear mis ojos con la belleza del exterior. Y el sol calienta mi rostro mientras sonrío... Besos mil, querida amiga!!!
Your lines seem to form the very drip described. Very sad when you add up the details. Yellow rose: perhaps she wanted more than a Platonic friendship. Complex poem in few words.
I really enjoyed this. With this yellow rose....I love how you let the readers know the exact color of the rose. It gives more depth to the poem. However, I was a little lost on the Small Smell It didn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem to me. Maybe I'm not comprehending it correctly.
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sigh...
there isice plinking on my window...
Like the gentle wind sweetly caressing.
The window opens many desires.
Joy always,
Susan
I like how soft the approach was to this piece. I definitely need to read more. Enjoyed the visual through your words!
I love the way that you express the senses through this poem. It's very tender.
Such a nice scene you described here. Nice piece, Dulce!
there's a lotta longing here..... quite beautiful!
a gentle calm...anticipation in waiting. ☺
tender and soul soothing...
beautiful..."a smile small smell"...so present.
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Fuera
mi ventana...
me invita a recrear mis ojos con la belleza del exterior.
Y el sol calienta mi rostro
mientras sonrío...
Besos mil, querida amiga!!!
I like the image it created - calming and inquisitive at the same time.
Hi girl! I DO hope you're entering my giveaway!! This poem is really cute by the way. Lovin' the second stanza!
Kiss
Lula
Your lines seem to form the very drip described. Very sad when you add up the details. Yellow rose: perhaps she wanted more than a Platonic friendship. Complex poem in few words.
The moment is captured so well in your words.
A contemplative mind.
a simple, luscious pleasure.
A beautiful pensive evocative poem. Graceful - tender soft write. From a woman's lovely soul.
Stunning in its simplicity .
warm hugs,
joanny
ditto every word of joanny, dear dulce - love love the simplicity - and the power!!! beautiful!!!
Oh that is just beautiful...
Dulce, this one is as sweetly delicate as petal from a yellow rose, errr, well--yes!
You are getting better with age! How old now..forty-one? Sweet!
A moment of peace and serenity, encapsulated.
at the end of that i expelled a deep sigh..was i sad, alone, or just moved...lovely choice of words..pete
... pure sweetness.
A beautiful moment captured....:-)
The picture and the words compliment each other so beautifully! Well done.
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I love the elegance of this.
(sigh)... romantic and reflective... one of those moments, no?
Love 'em when they decide to stop by my mind's alleys...
A very soothing poem, Dulce...
Dear Dulce
Ahhh ... so perfect... I enjoyed the vividness of image and the Haiku like perfection...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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A tender beauty...I also *sigh*...
sweet and fragrant like the poetess.
perfect down to that drop that I believe has a twin from a closed eye
Aww..awesome! could feel all the words written..
Dulce,
Beautiful sweetly scented words and image.
Eileen
A beautiful piece, in so few words
stunning imagery.
well put.
A soft and gentle poem.
Beautifully captured scene.
Pamela
Beautiful Dulce...love your header....bkm
rose petals are the silk of heaven
Lovely poem. Wonderfully brief and I like the gorgeous imagery.
A moment caught in one's mind, soft and sensual.
Effective, tactile work.
i love it's simplicity, it's beauty and sensuality.
Aww.. it's so beautiful, made me feel nostalgic,... kind of deep feeling in a nutshell. Blessings.
THIS IS LAST WEEK'S!!!!
De ja vous...but a woman caught in a glimpse of time. Lovely stuff x
Thought Sooooooooo
hugs
Pretty.
I really enjoyed this.
With this yellow rose....I love how you let the readers know the exact color of the rose. It gives more depth to the poem. However, I was a little lost on the
Small
Smell
It didn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem to me. Maybe I'm not comprehending it correctly.
I really loved how you were descriptive on the color of the rose. I believe it gave depth to the poem.
With this yellow rose petal....
A peaceful read...one I hope to sense in the busy day ahead. Nice.
you say so much in so few lines... beautiful.
A sweet and gentle piece. Simply beautiful!
Lovely -- I left a comment before -- but did want to comment about the banner -- yes you do have artistic hands, a very good photo--
warm wishes,
joanny
I did a post for one shot then somehow forgot to link.. sigh!
Dear Dulce
Ahh!!! So sensuous. I enjoyed all the three parts but specially liked the ending culminating in a curtain call. Thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
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