Get no sign
From you
I pray
I beg
I cast spells
On you
I pray
I beg
Send out all my wishes
To the air
So that they get
To you
Get no sign
From you
If only all my tears
Could move your soul
That strength
That coldness you show
I still can’t concieve
Why I never give in
Another opportunity
That’s all I need
The chance
To let you
Try my skin
My desire
Another opportunity
Just one
To meet again
Look into each other’s eyes
Have a talk
Set you free
Conquer your sex,
your heart,
your soul…
Just once
and forever
And you’ll see then
Whether you were right
Or not.
© Dulce / Pamela Hanson image.............................HAPPY 09/09/09! Magical number...
15 comments:
One last time is never enough...
very well stated!
smiles,
I relate to this one, as always, it seems...keep writing from your heart, Dulce.
I have always loved the Pamela Hanson image...one of my faves...
~Calli
will 'just once' ever really be enough???
Only ONE more time????
Surely you jest, Dulce --grin!
PEACE!
D- I think my comment got lost. Shoot! Anyway, I said that I love how it reads but she seems more bent on proving herself than on salvaging a lost love. So I found it kinda sad. But good. ~rick
I think things are more meaningful when they have a limit.
You're getting really good with those sensual poetry.
may be i should call this 'The Lost Love' Dulce things are getting emotional here!
Good work... Check out my new post: Another Birth'
This place is absolute MAGIC!!! I am very happy to discover your wonders and words...There is no doubt I will follow you.Thank you for your inspiring comment on my blog.This last entry reveals we have some things in common and your entire blog has an amazing vibe..ONE LOVE
WOW, Dulce!
Your poetry amazes me.
So full of emotion and very sensual.
Keep writing.
But this one made me a little sad.
Sending you smiles across the many miles :)
Margie.
well, uh, yeah... love this
As always you catch the nunances of emotion. Your poems keep growing. But still I ask where is the joy.
Dr,
I can not write with joy or can I? Have a look at last Sunday's post and say.
Thank you all, my friends, for such 'lindos' comments on a poem I am not that proud of... It's The same old story.- :(
Who would not be touched by such words?
First, let me just say thanks so much for your visit to my Word Garden blog. A new face is always welcome!
Your blog is beautiful. I LOVE Whitman, Dickinson and Marlowe, whom you have on your sidebar. I also love the pictures with your poems. I happen to have this very Pamela Hanson poster on my bedroom door. It's been there for years, it was a gift from a friend. I love the Butterfly Woman in the next post up, too! She is new to me.
I enjoy your poems; your closing few lines on each poem are strong, and haunting.
Please visit again!
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