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Wednesday, September 23

MOSTLY WOMEN



These women of mine
Deserve more than a poem
With or without rhyme…


Faithful sisters

Devoted mothers
Worshipped daughters
Closest friends

These women
I can count on
Rely on and
With them go on
Soul to soul
Heart to heart

Hand in hand

We are a team

We represent Peace


We women play

Fair games

Do not make war

But badly love
We have a unique,

Divine bond

We ladies

We are all One


We are a chorus

Singing hymns

Which save this world

Bit after bit
From the misery,

Injustice, hostility

caused

By those so many

Cruel gentlemen.

© Dulce..............................................................................................Image By Deviantart

15 comments:

Shadow said...

mmm, must be in the genes. or the hunting instinct in men... girls just do things differently. and somewhere along the line, we (boys and girls) need to learn to appreciate them and mesh those differences into good... mmmmm, i like this poem!!!!!

Unknown said...

Lovely poem Dulce.

I'd l.u.v. to hear Laura Nyro singing it...

:)

xxx
'berta

Sylvia said...

How could it be? It's true; no testosterone, no need to fight, just to love! I was taught so too, women are special.

steveroni said...

DD...IMO this is one of your best, no wondering "what does this mean?"-

Being one of those "Gentlemen" I even so must agree with what you wrote. I am now a "peaceful peep" (as you commented on mine--thanks).

NOTE: I'll bet everyone in your class gets an "A"...because you are no doubt a good teacher, and so nice.

steveroni said...

Oh, and the PICTURE (forgot again!) it is purrrfect--cat is sitting at my feet!

How many times have we "older peeps" watched, as young men marched off to kill and be killed. Such a waste of God's handiwork.

Peace!

G-Man said...

I'm hearing you ROAR!!!!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Hi, found you on another blog. Glad I did. Great poem

love-Melanie-bhd

Margie said...

Loved this so much, Dulce!
So very much!
Beautiful!

Margie:)
xx

Nessa said...

If women could stick closer together, we'd fix the world.

Liam said...

"Cruel gentlemen" Excellent oxymoron.

Jessie said...

so many wonderful comments have already been said -- and i agree with them all.

well done!

smiles,

Dr.John said...

Great poem
Interesting feelings.
But wrong.
Woman are not kinder or less cruel than men.
Look at history . Have countries ruled by Queens had a nicer government than those ruled by Kings?
Many of the traitors were woman.
From Biblical times until now woman are as bad as we are.
All sinners in a sinful world.
Anything else is illusion.
Sorry!
We can not base all woman on you or we would have to base all men on me. It doesn't work that way.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Shame Dr John,
you've forgotten to mention all behind those few women who ever devoted themselves to politics were MEN!

Calli said...

This is pure beauty, Dulce!

We women are a team in this big world of ours. We are the bearers of children and co-creators, and when fate steps in, in a good way, we then share all that goodness with a fabulous deserving gentlemen. They're out there!

Some speech huh?

much love~
~Calli

Fireblossom said...

I just love this, Dulce! I'm loving a lot of the comments you have received, as well.

I saw a bumper sticker I liked. it said, "Listen to women...for a change." :-)