He wrote.
Your passion
Transmutes
All kinds of seduction
So I am writing about our night
Tonight
As I do and enjoy you…
Starting by your toes
You already feel the abyss.
I kiss you upwards
So little by little
Do not get desperate…
East to west
West to east
If I am not torturing you
Why do you move
Like a snake?
Stand quiet
Your pleasure you know
Is my most sublime treasure
Please don’t make a move
As there is no pressure…
And I kiss you up
Little by little
East to west
West to east
Towards that wet north
I have not even
Touched yet...
I love the way I please
This divine, naughty girl
I love to smell
Your climax
As I sense it in my mouth
Now
Your smile is a chill out
Which makes me feel
The luckiest man on earth
You my sweetest gem.
_____________________________________________________
© Dulce
27 comments:
oh go ahead and write!
:)) ! What more can I say?
Wheeeuuuw (whistle!) Dulce-Girl, this kind of thinking, writing becomes you--or does it become him? Or both?
So erotic, yet is not rude to the sensibilities. You will have peeps waiting for "Wednesday" like Mr G has us panting for Friday to arrive.
Mil Besos
Girl, you got me over here speechless :) All hot and bothered at work lol...I LOVE it...I felt like I was there feeling that moment as well
Oh how I waited with such patience of this one this snowy windy December wednesday.
First of all while I can still use the keys on the keyboard, my moist finger tips sweating as the beads of sweat are dripping of my Heated body this moment,I need to say THANKS so much for this.. WOW!! you are so kind and sweet,.. HUGS
I love all you write but as you know I love Wednesdays over here at your place hehehe..
Now I am set and ready, I called 911 this morning and asked them to be close, and I was right lol
The snow will melt as soon as I step out..
WOW this is erotic at it's best, passion , sensual, luring, tempting with teasing, all the right stuff..
If I were a da da da da da .. LOL
tip toes softly out the door, panting, waving thanks sweet one , until next one, I await with patience and starvation
HUGS LOVE U MUCH xo
steamy, hot!!!
Dulce,
Once again thanks to Tabitha i m here discovering...yummy words,the mouth...can do so many things, from the most gentlest to the most cruelest....but as for me i love the words you spill...
thankyou
col
Oh, Dulce. I don't know... well, no... wait... I was going to say... well... okay... I'm so tongue-tied but... This is so yummy! There you have it. I love erotica. And this is beautiful erotica that I can enjoy without going yuck yuck yuck. It's lovely, to say the least. And now you've turned me into an even bigger fan! And what a wicked wicked image that is! Very very fine, my lady!!!
Nevine
Yes I'm with JStar. It suddenly got very warm in here. That was awesome.
Dulce, bravo!
something to send you, that the mailman can't deliver... personally !
ahhh nicely put sweet one...
Wow...this is one of your best by far. This was just awesome :)
Dulce, I have never read anything so erotic before! That was actually incredible. That was a hot one! I can't wait for my boyfriend to get home tonite so I can play with him. In the meantime, you have me ........ myself!
WowowoowoowowEEEEE!
Secretia
something for you at my blog.. HUGS
(Fanning self) Whoo! it just got really hot in here girl! Sensual words... you always make me blush! :)
Oh Inky My dearest friend, You've made my day!!!
I love you!
THANK YOU
And thank you, all the rest of you my sweet friends and followers... I'm so happy you like my 'tries' on sweet poetry..
I feel the happiest and luckiest woman on earth today!
Love hugs and sweeeeeet smiles to you ALL!
beautiful work .
Inky deserves something like this , that loveble one !
it is nice to meet you Dulce !!
wow! i just saw now : Shadow , Nevine , Inky , Secretia ... what grat club you have here !! this must to be a blessed blog !!!
Amazing. Such a crescendo! Brilliant poem. P.S. I love you too.
This poem I understand completely. It brings back memories.
Good!!!!
Love without pressure, it's sublime.
Besos:)
Almost too sexy for me.
thank you for your attention honey . you are really "dulce" .
hope to see you and come here a lot for now one !!
Wow! Love the sensuality here! I am glad I stopped by over here!
Speechless... so consuming, fiery hot! Love this, Dulce
I'll have to turn my a/c on now, whew!
This was wonderful!
Oh this is 'something'...wow!
and I am so happy you met Caio~ you will adore him...he is a wonderful artist and man!
much love~
Calli
Very sexy.
Car Goes Boom
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