This scene I can beautify
Still a little bit more
Or say, a lot more
It all depends…
With the voices singing
I hear from the soul
Of the souls
Who left me some
Or long ago.
This mystery I can purify
If I didn’t have to depend
On all the thoughts
Talking in my head
All at a time
Cannot keep away
This simulation I can dignify
By trying once and again
Start all over again?
To hold on myself
My self pity, my revenge
When I disappear for two
Maybe three days
Rescuing the scene
The mystery and simulation
I travel with ghosts
Whose bad intentions
And attempts
To make this one
A new spirit of perfection
And laments fly
In the sky
No redemption
Readers may pass along
With astonishment
Having understood the least
As if this were about
A beast
Needed no beverages
To get to these stages
Of self conscience
And because my soul
Needs to speak though
A smart imperfect mind
Words search any way
Whichever
To come out
And in positive deciphering
The scene back on stage
Which I could beautify
And the mystery purify
The simulation dignify
But it so much depends
On this deep pending
Never ending
Why!
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© Dulce
15 comments:
Dulce, In AA, we call this the "committee". They sometimes are dangerous Peeps--in my head:
"....If I didn’t have to depend
On all the thoughts
Talking in my head
All at a time
Cannot keep away"
"This simulation I can dignify
By trying once and again
Start all over again?"
Now this lines show HOPE, denouncing the "committee's" findings. Live with the hope. Fk the committee.
Here am I, analyzing the Master of "Hidden-meaning" poetry.
Love your post. Love you.
I'm glad you liked the poem. Maybe one day I might here the voice behind the words. Next time I go to Europe I will let you know through your blog.
Merry christmas & Happy New Year
Dear Dulce,
You have such an incredible talent! I wait every day to see if you are going to post another poem. They are like gifts!
May Santa bring your every hearts desire!
I read this over and over but I don't get the meaning this time, maybe it will become clear in time.
I like the way it reads, but...?
Secretia
the part that speaks to me is "I travel with ghosts..." The voices in my head so many times need to be quieted so I can hear...the One who counts the most. Hey have a great holiday....Stay safe and have a ton of fun. Sarah
You really packed this one. It will make people think and guess.
wow dulce, such is the travelling mind indeed.
Deseo que pases unas fiestas de Navidad muy, muy feliz.
Un beso.
Your poems are always so thought provoking Dulce.
I wish you a Very Happy Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year m'dear. x
Dulce, I do love the rhythm in this piece. It sounds like it could be turned into a song. And I also like the thought process, like you're trying to rationalize everything. Oh, how we try to rationalize, and then fall on our knees... As always, Dulce, I do love what you write.
Nevine
Ya vendré a leerte con tiempo, está renaciendo mi compu, pero me faltan algunas cositas.
Pasaba a darte las Gracias por tu presencia.
Te deseo lo mejor!! que todo lo bueno renazca en tu vida.
FELICIDADES!!
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bESOS:)
Hey it just occurred to me--Was the title "Deep Pending" supposed to read "deep Ending"???
Jus sayin'
Depending dear STEVE, depending...
It's a pun of words which takes...
*Deep Ending
*Depending +
*Deep pending...
Thank you all for your so nice comments on this 'funny' post...
beautiful.
This poems sounds like the thought process that takes place in my mind as well :) Love it!
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