It’s so easy
To be my man
All you have to do
Make me laugh,
Otherwise…
And as you do
You must keep
That eye contact,
Otherwise…
If apart from your natural one
You can play another instrument
You’ve gained
Five extra points,
Otherwise…
It’s so easy
To be my man
All you have to do
Is keep your thing
At
Until I decide
Ok it’s high time
It was
At quarter past...
Otherwise,
You’d be
Just another
Ordinary man…
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© Dulce
24 comments:
Ha! Got to love the title! Very clever, dear Dulce!
I've absolutely love everything I've read of yours. Thank you :)
how playful and loving...
You've got a sense of humor!
Dulce, "He" would be wise to be your man! You make your messages so delightful. They are on the surface simple, but upon re-reading very deep. That makes them fascinating. I hear music playing when I read "Clock Wise"
Secretia
Thank you girls!
Yes, Sec. You are right. As far as men are concerned, it's every day clearer to me what I want... or at least what I do not want..¡¡ ;)
Sweeter Dulce (I know--that is redundant--grin!),
My thought is that you say it more succinctly in your comment (above) than in your post:
"...it's every day clearer to me.... at least what I do NOT want..¡¡ ;)
--caps are mine.
Howevah, Dear Lady...another good po(em)sting--they seem to just roll out as from a factory inside your "poet-brain" (that meant as compliment!)
I saw that picture yesterday--how is it said?--IN my DREAMS--grin!
Until next time, favorite blog-peep...
This is nice Dulce :)
Brilliant poem, Dulce. Never thought of the clocks that way!! Besos!
I think my biggest fear was always the fear of being ordinary.... and now that's exactly what I am becoming.
very playful indeed!
I love ordinary men.. GOsh your mind is like a pot of GOLD, we get to share or pick some coins from the pot of gold everyday.
I myself feel ones life cannot be totally fulfilled unless you taste how good being ordinary truly is.
I think if most would act on the Ordinary relationships would last
HUGS,. ANother GREAT WRITE.
I can feel your passion in all you write ( even on a Monday ) lol
Ti AMo
Brilliant, playful, fun...you always amaze me with your words and the play you make with them...thank you!
G
Wonderful! Your writing is fantastic!
its cute :)
How playful. x
Es genial!!!!!
Besos:)
Clockwise I like!!! Very much... he he he. Dulce, that was naughty and sweet. "... another instrument..." Oh my! ;-)
You seem very easy to please.
:)
Nicholas
wow , it is better i start to read and decorate a joke's book , back to study piano ....
what a list !!
3:15....Sorry! *wink*
There has to be room for us ordinary men as well.
Dulce- Remeinds me of Steve Martin: all I need is this chair...and this lamp...and this pen...and that's all I need. My thing won't go to quarter past anything. It's a trick I'd like to see. Nice writing. ~rick
What a great poem
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