I need your words
To tell you nothing
I need your words…
I sense the moment
Of the breeze
Which takes away
Another late
Autumn leaf
To where I am and run
To pick it up
And maybe
Frame it
I feel I need your words
To tell you
How important it is to you
And how much I care
I need your words
To tell you nothing
It’s all your fault
You started this
Now I cannot
Get rid of it
I need your words
Cause I feel I need
To hold your hands
And kiss you
In the sweetest way ever
I need your words
To tell you that
I need your words
To tell you everything.
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© Dulce
23 comments:
You beat me to the first comment on another blog, so I thought I'd come and see who you were. Turns out you're someone who writes really enthralling poetry.
I guess if I have to lose, you're a good person to lose to. Nice to meet you.
Spoken words, recorded on paper or in our minds stay with us forever. We repeat them and they become part of us. You brought this out nicely.
Thanks, Secretia
feeling myself in this... needing his words
beautiful, as always Dulce
Sending warm hugs and wishes for a joyful day your way :)
The need to immerse ones self in another is an addicting passion.
Giant Crickets Invade Norway
to say so in "the sweetest way ever" - it is so loving to hear "your words" ---
I wish you "sweet evers" dear Dulce.
Most beautiful poetry. I need your words too...
THIS is a special kinda love... and keep writing your words, they are such a pleasure to read.
I like the words I see here but the feeling I get when I read your poetry really touches me.
beaautiful and touching...
We do need words, but always, and especially, the true heartfelt sentiment behind such words!
Yes, keep, keep writing, dearest!
xoxo
DD That sounds as if you're wanting to "talk" to someone...or is commenting not enough? One day you must tell us WHO? DAMMMIT. (So we may say things to heeem, which he might like not to hear.)
I hate suspense, but I LOVE it also! Hey, there is that "black-white, Up-Down, She says YES-she says NO" thing again! I really enjoy writing with you, or could you not guess?
Enough of my joking, Dulce, because you sound like you are hurting. You ARE "cared for", you ARE kissed in "the sweetest way", you ARE loved, you DO "tell everything" in your daily poems, between lines, in the spaces between stanzas (is that still a word?). Your blog-friends tell you all these things also. And yet, you want--need--more.
Maybe everyone should hire a "jet plane" and "don't know when they be home again..." and fly to your little island for a vacation? And you could then SEE for yourself, that everyone, everything, is real, is true, is all laced with, yes....love. Think of the fun, the pictures we all could post!
Love ya, Dulce-Girl!
Gorgeous and sensual, like a dream that I am reading, longing for the words of another.
Thank you for this beauty!
Gabi
Words something I always have trouble with.
I need your words
To tell you nothing
Algunas palabras son así de necesarias.........
Besos:)
This is just awesome...what would we do without words that are forever etched into our minds. :) Well done my friend :)
In another context this could be a religious poem and the words I need come from God.
a sweet pain, because you must love to feel this...
i see matthew has found you (first comment. He is one of my favorites!
much love
Dulce-Reading your words are like a riddle in a room of mirrors. So many lovely nuggets to be found. Perhaps, he's satisfied to swim in your words. Take care~rick
You and those endings! Just gorgeous.
Your words are simply lovely
If had a day to be a man LOL
I eat your words lol
its cute. :)
Wow I love this one. thanks for stopping by my blog.
xx
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