I am walking down
All alone
To this tube
Like thousands
They rush
While I glance
Must change from line six
To number five
Off and on
Where thousands
Of handsome faces
I see and lazy
I close my eyes
Only in this tube
I see
You
.........................................................................................................................................
© Dulce
19 comments:
Time to daydream is a beautiful thing!
Sometimes when we close eyes, we see the most beautiful visions...un escape bello.
Te deseo todo lo mejor de tus sueños, Chica. :)
Dulce-I really liked the breaks and rhythm. Almost thought of Gene Kelly dancing alongside it. It was really quite clever. Is that you in the top pic? I frikken love the hat and coat! ~rick
i read a focused mind here.
Brilliant.
love & hugs,
~Silver
Many...and I also, while visiting a large metropolis, surrounded by thousands, might find myself alone and lonely once again.
Incomplete, even forlorn.
But the vision of one in my mind, and the knowledge that I am loved by the absent one, will bring me from a day of rainy coldness to the warmth of a late springtime evening. OMG...I feel a poem forming here--grin!
You are writing well these days, girl! Take care.....
The "Mind's Eye" can see everything, Dulce. It is a wonder.
Secretia
Beautiful but for some reason I felt a little sad when I read it. I love your poetry.
1. in a crowd. sounds like a dream...
Good morning sweetess Dulce!! I used to ride the tube for years and I loved to people watch, WHEN and IF I got a seat ..lol. I am dreamer I admitt, and I love it lol
One can have great dreams and visuals.. YUMMO
LOVE THIS ,,. but then I love all your writes. Hope that handsome one pops up in your dreams LOL
WOW what a write that would be , HUGS and much luV
I never though I would say this, but I miss the Metro in Lisbon so much!
I like being in the subway too. Something I don't do often.
twice! and once more this morning!
how wonderful!
We don't have a tube here. Lovely piece my friend. :)
Rabbit, rabbit
I feel this same way when I ride metro :) I observe silently and my thoughts race...Then I close my eyes wishing my stop would come up soon because of the congestion lol...Love it
Thousands of faces and all she sees is one...
This is so creative, my sweet friend!
hugs & smiles
post script~
Love, love, LOVE, the new header! :)
I used to dream whith tube..in the end there was a light, you'll see the ligth too in you-tube.
Besos:)
I know nothing of breaks or rhythm but I like this poem. It brings me back long ago to my days in Chicago.
loved the cute touch of romance :)
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