Fate is capricious
In a way you can’t recall
While you remind past lies
Quite that much.
Way back to think of the ones
Why, if any of them was there to share
Bad luck, never get the chance
To meet your one
This night…
So full of night sounds
Just a mile away
Yet, he never drives your way
Fate is capricious
And so disappointing
Fed up with prays
The universe for you chose
Which had to be your rose
Still you think of that man
While the melody of those crickets
Reminds you-
It was long ago all over
So why should they
The stars that shine up
Show no one by your side
Because if you do not possess
You have not love.
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© Dulce
15 comments:
Very beautiful my friend and so true this is. Have a wonderful Sunday :)
Very well done.
Santa Puppets
That is very emotional, makes me kind of sad.
Secretia
Dulce- OK, first time I've ever heard of fate being capricious but love the twist. But even in seperation, does not love remain? curious, this. Nice delivery and flow. ~rick
Dulce, my favorite part, I have to admit, is the last quatrain. There is a beautiful rhythm to it, and it sings with a voice of its own. Very nice!
Nevine
So sad, so strange... I didn't get the last quatrain and I completely disagree with it. I have a 100% passionate marriage and I don't possess my husband. I have three wonderful children and I do not possess them. No, love is no possession. Your love is not your property. He is yours because he freely wants to. And that's the best. I'm not writing this to convince you, but just to help you, dear Dulce, because I love you and I want you to find true love. Kisses :)
Unlike Sylvia, whose interesting comments I quite enjoy reading, I agree utterly with what you have written here, dear Dulce. This one went straight to my heart.
PS--to be clear, I agree that love is not possession, as in owning a vacuum cleaner. But it IS possession in terms of the person BEING THERE, and belonging to each other. That's my little opinion. I'll hush up now!
Sweet Dulce, such interesting, thoughtful comments, I am glad I read them before this:
The picture is stated in the last four lines (quatrain! I LOVE that word from Nevine!)...
I must ask here myself the question, "How can I love the flower which I've never seen, never touched (Oooh, "don't touch the flowers!"), never smelled of its fragrance?
Answer: I believe it's possible. That word "possess" seems to give a problem...to me possession means here,
"to have the benefit of..to enjoy, have, hold."
The message then is to love, love, LOVE, OK? Dulce?
I read it differently than the others. I think you're saying if you do not possess, meaning he is not currently in your life, then you do not have love...but, BUT you do because you hold it in your heart and it grows and expands and as you love whomever is in your world; your son, relatives, friends, lovers, kindred spirits, as you do this and you do it so selflessly... IT WILL ALL BE RETURNED TO YOU as it is now from those you love, but also in the form of HIM...(the gift)...I believe that!
know this love~
Calli
con esta me pillaste...
Creo que hablas de que sigue estando el amor hacia alguien que no está.
El amor Es y no depende de tiempo ni de espacio.
Buen domingo bonita!!
Besos:)
How lovely, how sad, it makes me feel a little lonely.
But if you possess then you have not love but a possession.
Beautifully sad. Beautiful photo. Just... beautiful!
love love love, can be maddening.. it can make us lose control, want to control, possess, I know I do not want to be thought of as a possession, but I love when my heart shows me, how he possessed mine.
The old saying goes" “If you love someone, let them go. If they return to you, it was meant to be. If they don’t, their love was never yours to begin with…”
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