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Back’s the knight
Hiding his sword
..
On his face
that smile...
To his feet...
I’ve come down.
.
He insists
Exists!
-.
Tedious, fatiguing return
To my mind…
..
Back’s the knight
And I resist ...
Saw him kissing me Tedious, fatiguing return
To my mind…
..
Back’s the knight
And I resist ...
Aroused by his whispering...
..
Why does he persist?
Should make a list...
.,,
Off’s the knight…
Exertion and time:
Wasted.
_______________________________________ 55 Flash Fiction Friday
17 comments:
such a sweet tease.. well done
very dynamic feel of it.
beautiful 55.
So Medievically Romantic!!
I don't think that any time was wasted My Friend.
Beautiful 55 Dulce...
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
beautiful, great colours!
Hughs Anja
ah - nothing better than a brave knight in a shining armour...hopefully he returns..
oh i love the medieval period so romantic and the pursuit of a fair lady as well...
Build the castles, slay the infidels
and bring home the Holy Grail--or was that Holy 'GIRL'?
You and Moondustwriter have been back there...a former life?
In the Great Plan, everything works out in the end. A story about a 2-year-old child will illustrate, in a post two days hence. (OMG--HENCE???)
Stay cool girl, while over here--and there--we freeze!
(psst.... nice 55)
Do I detect a pun at the end? Or is that just wishful thinking on my part
love this piece, dulce - love the play on words and with words!!! great work!
Romancing the middle ages when bathing was thought to damage the soul. Can you imaginge how they smelled.
I buzz kill. But I love your 55 just the same.
Sometimes a lady must play hard to get!
Aahh...this bittersweet romance!! Can't one do without it...won't do with.. (sigh)
Nicely composed, Dulce... Very felt!
love the romantic dreamy fairytale quality.
A girl who can resist a knight? Imagine that! Beautifully expressed, Dulce.
No hay forma de resistirse aun caballero cielo... no hay manera.
Besazos!!!
So he didn't run away with the lady fair but left her to return another day! Good thing for what would we do without our Dulce.
Lovely picture, by the way, of mother and son!
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