'Mum, I heard that bird
Singing as we woke up
This morning.'
'Yes, it always does.'
'So why don't we
Ever listen to it?'
Ever listen to it?'
'Why should we?'
'I feel it's trying
To say something.'
To say something.'
'Perhaps…
That there's always
A good reason to get up?
One of them,
And most important, sweetie,
We have each other.'
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© Dulce
That there's always
A good reason to get up?
One of them,
And most important, sweetie,
We have each other.'
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© Dulce
Image by Devianart- as usual
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38 comments:
What a wonderful 55. Having someone in your life that important is just well the best one could ever ask for :)
what a glorious poem, so wonderful, a special blessing to have someone like that so share it with.. GREAT 55.. Happy weekend.. SMILES
How utterly sweet is this poem, Dulce...it's "goose-bump" time.
This post/poem is a keeper!
Love and peace to you both, dear.
Great words. Lovely.
how wonder-filled. out the mouths of babes... let's stop to smell the roses, let's stop to listen to the birds...
nobody can say it like a kid can! and how often we take for granted the small chirps of a day
This is so cool, Dulce. I love it!
Bosco and I have a similar exchange every morning, except he adds, "give me my morning chew bone, Mom!" He;s just been crunching on it as I have been reading your poem. :-)
What a great 55 to start my morning with. Just reading it gives a lift to the Spirit.
Well done.
Aw, nice. Those birdies are so wise.
Flash 55 - Home of Our Own
Waking up to the morning sounds and having a loved one by our side...perfect!!!
Have a great weekend, and come by to visit me with my 55 if you can.
Such a beautiful 55.... so touching! loved this one Dulce!
Have a wonderful weekend.
See you on Sunday....I'm taking my usual weekend break..... Yay for the weekends!
Take care my friend.
Margie
xx
beautiful 55. love those moments with the little ones.
mine is up!
Just came by again to tell you that I think you have a gift for writing 55's.
You are the best of the best at it!
Margie
xx
Out of the mouth of babes...we should listen! :) Have a sweet weekend!
Sweet and touching and so nice to wake to the sound of birdies and someone you love.
You'll find my 55 here:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Drifting.
Enjoy your weekend,
Chef Kar
Excellent question, why don't we ever listen to it?
Great 55, Dulce and a good lesson to boot. :D Nicely done.
Yes very touching. I can only imagine how your personal life has to take second place to the love of your son. I guess in a few months I will find out for myself. When Kirsten has our baby.
i love the way you sing out with this one!
Have you heard "My Singing Bird" Sinead O'Connor
Lovely thoughts to you dear one!
wonderful 55 and oh so true!
Very sweet. I always listen to the birds in the morning. If I wake up and don't hear them then that's a sure sign something bad is getting ready to happen.
Very tender. I like it.
i love reading your words, i really enjoy it!! great 55!! mine is up too
Loved Morning lesson-had a direct hit with me.
Give me a reason?
She has been there
sharing each morning.
20600 mornings
Through "drinking(3300)and sobriety
(17300).
She is my love, my soul mate.
Just yesterday as I brought her home from the hospital. OK
She said. "we're really blessed, always there for each other."
We both love the song.
"Morning has broken"
JF
We like to hear birds in the morning. They are very tasty and call us to breakfast.
Nice poem though.
Very good 55
Thanks for your comment on ours.
Awwww, I have goose bumps. Love the post :)
Awww. Very sweet.
If it were my mom, it would be more along the lines of "because it's calling out it's territory to other birds."
This is so pretty and sweet. I love it!
What a sweet 55ve!
You sure got it goin on girl...
Excellent 55.
Heart warming and beautiful...
Have a Glorious Week-End...G
A good reason to get up every morning. I loved it!
What a lovely sentiment, Dulce... having eachother, supporting one another really is such an important reason to participate in the world.
Oh Yes! "And most important, sweetie, We have each other." In the final analysis, that is the most important thing of all. It is all that matters - loving each other.
Thanks for this beautiful 55 and that sweet reminder.
PG
Having love in your live makes it perfect. LOVE this 55!!
very endearing poem..
Very nice blog and nice poetry also. Thanks for stopping bye my place and leaving your comments see you next 55.
Thanks again
Larry
Goodbye
Oh, Hon, this is so sweet & beautiful. I am again with Steve, I have goose bumps...
happy 100th ...wow! excellent!
Congrats on your 100th post!!!
So sweet ... nature does know best!
thank you for being a faithful visitor --
and i apologize for being so late...
smiles,
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