I’ve found the key
After years on end
Searching for it
I lighted upon the clue
After lots of struggle
And scrutiny
Self looking in
Reaching peaks
Lost in the middle
Of humid wooden hills
I found the answer
To my inquiries
I felt the nuance
The placid relief
The end of incongruous
Grieves and deeds
Got rid of fake ghosts
Found the device
Which frees me
From them all
Got the peace
Which came
After years on end
To get to accept
And know myself
Feels great to touch
And hold this key
That opens
All the doors
Which lead to me.
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© Dulce
Image> Rebirth by Deviantart
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Well, my dear Thom has awarded me together with a huge number of people...today again. THANKS A LOT THOM. This is sooooo beautiful!
Lots of conditions to get the award, though!
But I'm going to accept it anyway, and I am passing it to everyone who has come, is coming or will come by here TODAY, Wednesday 21st. It's my way to say THANKS Congrats to all of you!!!
17 comments:
very well written!! i love the last part, to open the doors that lead to me!! great poem
Well Dulce, you know I love your work. But the lines which appealed most to me--naturally--were these:
...the peace..
After years..
Working....
...to accept
And know myself...
How wonderful to know one self at a young age, some peeps never get to that place.
HOW exquisitely NEAT-O!
Hi Dulce,
Love your poem. Wanted you to know "PG WAS HERE"!
PG
Very well written, Dulce. And this key sounds like a very personal metaphorical symbol.
To know yourself is to love yourself and many people take a long time to really find that key. You are welcome for the award. Check my blog tomorrow :) Another ones coming LOL :)
now that's the key to find...
Hmm...now where did I leave my keys??? ;-)
That's the KEY and your words PROFOUND!
...have a wonderful week, sweet friend! Sorry, If I've been away much...
~Calli
ahhh, the key, the lock -
release!
sweet dulce - wonderful
Poetry is hard for us dragons to grasp or to write. But yours feels nice on the ear. We wish we had the key.
so beautiful, i hope you never lose your key ...
always smiles for you,
What a lovely and hopeful poem.
Wordless Wednesday - King of the Field
Oh, how wonderful!
Simply love this poem!
Margie
xx
It's the only one key!!
Great Dulce!!
Besos:)
Agaijn a really upbeat poem. I hope the poem is true4 and you have found the key.
I don't have your email so I'll write this here, if that's all right?
Bosco is so happy that you want to see his picture! If you go to his poem, in the labels at the bottom, click on "Bosco." Two poems will come up...the new one and one about Bosco from August, which has his picture! :-)
"Feels great to touch and hold this key, that opens all the doors which lead to me"... I love that, Dulce! I want to get to that place, to open the door to me. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, dear friend.
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