You got a wrong idea of me
You misunderstood everything
You got me in low esteem
And didn’t dare know me
You fool
Got a wrong idea of us
And did not allow a chance
How could you say you were right?
You got everything, but no glance
I got a fake idea of you
I misunderstood every single clue
What an imbecile
I had you in so high esteem
Of a man you only had
That small piece…
I made a fool of myself
And you made
The greatest mistake
No, I did!
And the dream
Of you and me comes back again
Only because I’m sleeping
Why the hell do I still
Write about this?
© Dulce
*Our Farewell* Image by Deviantart
18 comments:
I love the last lines!
Wowwwwww, powerful stuff! You remind me of me because sometimes when I'm hurt and angry, I write some of my most intense and striking poetry.
And do you know why these ghosts keep haunting us? Because the burning emotions that keep the fire going are our own, they came from us, and not the other person. The good news is, so do the good feelings.
I love that picture! The little cat peeking over her shoulder! Tell me, little cat, why are humans such fools? ;-)
Your poetry is the best. it's unique and warms my heart!
Secretia
Some feelings have the ability to return, it's good transmute them into poetry.
You have a great ability to do.
Good Sunday!!
Kisses:)
oh, shattered dreams.....
A slap with a velvet glove! Great!
I loved the pic. But about the poem, pardon my ignorance, is it about a love lost? If so, I share your same thoughts, just that I put it in a different way.
http://jstgibberish.blogspot.com/2009/07/maybe-its-all-just-dream.html
OBOYOBOYOBOYOBOYOBOY--I am SO glad I'm not THAT guy, the damned FOOL --grin!
How do we become such fools? Self-Centeredness, I bet. ME, ME, ME, ME! Ouch! FOOL!
LOVE and PEACE!
Ooh, I think they come back over and over to us until the lesson is learned and we make peace and move on.
At least in my experience they do!
Wonderful piece and what I'd would like to have said to several people at one point or another in my life!
I think he would be the only fool.
Good Poem
Sometimes mixed with the bad is some good. It is that little bit of good that calls back those memories. A kind of a " What If" thought about something that can't be.
Very powerful my friend. I think we have all said that a time or two. But we learn and most likely if it ever happens again, go through it all over. Life is strange sometimes :) Have a wonderful Sunday and an great week ahead :)
I agree with Thom ... it is very poewrful!
But also sad to me but my dear Dulce you really know how to express your deepest feelings through your poetry!
Joy & blessings to you, my friend!
Margie
xx
Yeah, the eternally burning fire inside. ... when forever falls apart. Forever is so brief...mill of hugs
Mixed emotions, love/hate, joy/sorrow, stupidity/wise....
You've captured it all. Great job.
I find the times I felt foolish to be the times that haunt me the most.
Very moving poem.
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Very well done!!!
Speak your mind, walk away ... he doesn't need to know about the dreams...
smiles,
D-because you must. The pen is mightier...~rick
Ahhh... some boys. As they say, 'you've got to kiss alot of frogs before you find your prince." But at least the frogs are good for inspiring great poetry!
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