Of a 10th month
The two brothers
Joyfully playing
Walking and for
Mystery exploring…
Have found darkness
Innocent will
All of a sudden
Here arrives the mist…
Come across
The opening mouth
Of a huge tree trunk …
Their yell is heard
All over the place.
Shame, they’ve never
Been seen again.
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© Dulce
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31 comments:
A spooky 55 with a great ending.
OMG that's scary, the picture is awesome and appropriate for this time, Halloween, Sad if true. GREAT 55.. SMILES
Wishing you a happy hallow's Eve and a great weekend.. SMILES
oooooooooooooo, so very eerie. Spine tingling in fact. And, I love it.
Have a terrorific Halloween tomorrow---
My 55 is a two-parter this week...
Trick or Treats HERE
That was nice, it's like food to me to read stuff this good.
ohhh. love your spooky 55! beware the mist in the darkness...boo!
mine is up!
A very scary 55.
Flash 55 - Morbid Norberth
ooooooo, well done! happy halloween dulce!
You know as a kid, I had a recurring Nightmare about a tree coming to life and grabbing me!!
Excellent 55 Dulce.
Spooky!
Thanks for this awesome contribution, and have a Fun-Filled Week-End....G
Now this I understood.
A great Halloween 55.
What a real shame...children should be seen and not heard...or is that "heard and not seen?" Hmmmmmm?
BIG GRIN. GOOD Halloween post
I'll stay out of the woods this weekend...and maybe forever?
Hell, I'm ALREADY in the woods! And don't want to leave. It is so nice here in the shade. And look! Over the hill is the beach.
Did you see something move inside that trunk of a fallen tree? Woe is ME!
Good post, Dulce. Love and PEACE to you!
Perfect timing for such a spooky ending. Well done and the picture adds so much to the tale.
You'll find 55 ~ Skipping Stones posted.
Well, that's certainly ONE way to go "back to nature"! ;-)
loved the pic. and the story. you must always be careful when walking through the forest, the unknown is always there...
I LOVE YOUR HALLOWEEN Picture.. on the side.. awesome.. BTW.. I think Steve is hiding in there LOL
OOOOOOOOO ... SCARY one Dulce and I loved it!
I love Halloween!
Good writing as always!
See you on Sunday!
Have a great SCARY and SPOOKY Halloween Weekend!
Margie:)
xxx
Spooktacular! Love the image that goes with it too.
Oooo spooky!
I especially like the short stories.
In 55 words have reflected the Halloween spirit
As always good...
Creo que ya te lo dije antes, en mi blog hay un premio "alma con arte" y la tuya lo tiene así que es tuyo...(si lo quieres claro)
Besos:)
Hooray!
Well conceived, a mystery, an enigma, another ghost of Halloween treasure -
a trick and a treat!
I have goose bumps now. An eerie 55. But, I do appreciate scary tales. Thanks, Dulce!
Last night I watched a late movie Dracula with Gary Oldham and keanu Reeves now you write this.
How weird is that?
Oh my that's spooky! Good one Dulce. :)
Halloween... Helloween!
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We dragons know that hitonious tree personally. It just can't help itself.
A risible and scary 55.
Dulce,
I love this Halloween ghost story 55.
PG
Scary 55...but, perfect for the season! :) Love that pic too!!
Have a great SPOOKY weekend...
Appropriately spooky...loved the photo illustration!
Have a Happy Haunted Day yourself. ;)
And so the darkness prevails over the light in this piece!!created the right atmosphere and the twist added to the environment!!so these two boys disappeared but can we hear them playing somewhere within the depths of the woods even now??hehe added to the spooky effect.keep writing!!
very cool!
this is beautiful, spooky :)
trisha
suryakana.blogspot.com
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