So much she desired
So little acquired.
He brought that quietude
To her strayed soul
He gave that hope
To her grievous heart
Gossiping girls
Giggling and all that
You see?
I’ve found the one
No need to look for him
Among the vultures!
A sunny bright morning
That little by little
Permission was given
To both soul and heart
To live the greatest experience
Of her existence
That little by little
Permission was given
To dream as long as she liked
Immersed in the world
Of the princess finding
Her Charming Prince
At long last
That little by little
Permission was given
To be her guiding knight
And follow him till
The ends of time
Prepared her room
To be shared with him
Lighted red candles
Prayed all saints and Lord
That the dream came true
That little by little
Permission was given
To ask fortune tellers
Who assured
He was in her hands
So she gave permission
To herself to go and ask.
Permission rejected.
Her soul, her heart
Her hope, her pride
Humiliated.
So much she desired
So little acquired.
________________________________________________________________
Dulce
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19 comments:
Es muy bello.
No siempre conseguimos todo lo deseado pero que eso no mate el deseo, no sabemos cuando ..pero hay un tiempo para que sucedan.
Siempre hay un próximo sueño a cumplir.
Besos:)
This one cuts deep my dear, Dulce. I feel your pain. For now, just for now, be your own Knight in shining armor. Take care of your heart and treasure it. When the time is truly right love will happen. It will happen beautifully and naturally!
It just will, this I know~
~xo
~Calli
There is lots of pain in this poem. But it is time to put the pain in the past and rejoice in the now.
Cry if you care to, Miss sorrow-flower Dulce. I'll just sit here with you, if you don't mind, and watch the rain, too. Then, perhaps, it will not seem quite so sad, si?
We look for permission outside of ourselves way too often.
Frequently when I desire less, I acquire MUCH more!
But not always of what I had first desired.
Patience, Dear Dulce. Rather than seek--be sought. I know you understand.
And that Greatest defect, Pride, will be diminished! Yes, it will!
PEACE and LOVE is waiting you, DD. Let Go, and Let God (as you understand Him)
Dear Dulce
My heart goes out to you!
I feel your pain...oh so much pain!
I wish I could take your heartache away but of-couse, I cannot do that.
Just kwow I care!
Please do not despair!
Be gentle with yourself.
Be kind to yourself.
Talk to God if you feel the need.
God is there for you.
Margie
xxx
Damn, Dulce-what a shitty ending! (no offense) I love the little by little line and so hoped for a rainbow. Even in pain you write lovingly. Love the pic too. Be well~rick
how sad, how very very sad. the build-up, only to fall....
My People,
When I woke up this morning and read your comments I could not help it but cry. It's so immense the support I get, I feel, from you all.
It's true I am not having a great time as far as'love' is concerned, but, for the rest, everything is ok, right?
I wrote this poem a month ago or so... I never found a good reason to post it, now! I DID yesterday...
You are lovely people... and YES I understand that sadness is just periods one has to live and I do not reject it easily, both because it is a deep, painful and hard feeling, and also because it is usually the best for me to write a 'good' poem...
Now...LOL!
XOXO
Dear Dulce
Just read your comment on my blog and I felt such a joy when I read that "you were taking my advice."
Take the very best of care dear Dulce.
Joy, blessings and love to you, my friend.
It's off to work I go ....hope you are having a good day at work.
God bless you!
Many hugs of caring sent to you!
And thanks so very much for the lovely comment!
Margie:)
xxx
Oh, and how blessed you are to have a good father and he's still with you and you can enjoy his company.
That is truly a blessing in your life ...cherish it, my dear!
My dear father died when he was only 64 yrs old.
I miss him so much.
Bye, bye ...I'm rushing now...off I go!
*HUGZ*
Margie:)
Hola cariño :
Un buen amigo tuyo dejó un mensaje en mi blog, pasa a leerlo, está en la entrada Pedir la lluvia.
Me pide que te diga algo pero mejor lo lees tu.
Besos:)
wow.. thats deep. and i really like it. really pretty. im following you by the way.. u shuld do the same!
rejection ... sometimes we learn and try again...
Hi hun, I have missed some great words whilst I was away.
To find ones so sad please accept. This makes me want to give you a hug. Which is very rare for me.
Oh... Too sad! They don't make princes like they did before any more. Now the Princes are nothing but... What you know!
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I know exactly how you feel, it does cut at the artaries, but apparently time heals all wounds, so you and I have to beleive in this and take care of ourselves.. You write so god damn beautifully..
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