Two friends
In their forties 
having coffee
Outside a bar.
‘I’m fed up with men
Nobody loves me…’
The man in the photo
Passing by…
‘Wow! Gorgeous one!’
‘Not my type
I like them rather skinny…
Anyway,
To hell with them all!’
He winks at her…
…Oops!
Her coffee all spilled
On her white dress.
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© Dulce.....................................................................................Man in photo: Erik Elías
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25 comments:
I couldn't have got them through the *door* in 55 words Dulce!
Well done you!!
Have a great weekend
xxx
'berta
LOL! This is wonderful! Great characterization.
Terrific "55" DD...but you know, I just HATE to see good cup of coffee wasted. I'm going to have some now. Before the spilling begins again!
Love and Peace!
DS
Good morning, darling Dulce!
I love your 55. I'll have you know that I had coffee with none other than the G-Man and managed to not spill a drop, despite being in the presence of greatness! ;-)
I believe that man is here in Milan for Men's Fashion Week ~ I best take my coffee in my apartment or skip the white dress.
Fab 55 Dulce ~ sweet.
You will find mine HERE. Have a great weekend.
Chef Kar
Dang! If that piece of candy winked at ME...I'd do more than spill my coffee!!
Mine's posted below my Friday Show n Tell...it's kinda creepy this week.
Here's the link
Click for my 55
He, he, he! (I'd spill my coffee, too.)
i hope i never find myself feeling that way again. i hope if i find myself single, that i move ahead quickly ready for love again, life is too short not to love. great post, mine is up too
this was GREAT! men ... a necessary evil. and *amn the one you have posted here looks good! your new blog home decor ... i think it suits you.
have a great weekend.
Let's see......
Coffee - Men - Coffee - Men........
Sometimes it is a toss-up.
BUT - NEVER on my white dress.
Love this 55. Very, very cute.
PG
ha. funny how life can change in an instant...i lament the coffee though, could use some more.. great 55.
A great and sort of funny 55.
You do right well and feelings show in your characters.
;)
Hang on to your coffee - lol
cool post Dulce
jaja está genial!!
Lovely 55!!
Muaks:)
He'd have to be REALLY cute to get me to waste coffee!
We poor dragons don't understand that romantic stuff. You humans are always spilling coffee over it.
You women crack me up....
Excellent 55 Dulce!!!
Quality work as usual. Thanks for the smile...YOU ROCK!!!
Have a Great Week-End...G
Hmmm, protesting too much, you think? Nicely done!
Great 55 Dulce!
I loved it!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Margie:)
xx
Oh, love the new banner!
Is that you?
Gorgeous!
Can't live with them... Can't live without them. The wonderful human thing!
I know I already commented, but would you mind very much if I sneak back in to say that I LOVE your new header? So nice! Perfect for Autumn, Dulce. :-)
THANKS A LOT everyone for these cool comments!
Well, I guess some men have that effect.
Nicely done.
It seems like grapes are sour with these two :D
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