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Walking in the path
Of history
We are
Your voice I trust
So much peace I need
On this Wednesday
How many miles away
Yet so near
Yet so far
As if like heaven
Where the hell is that!
Trillions of miles away
Infinite is the space
Eternal.
Where are you?
So near
So far
No beginning
No end.
How can I accept
But I must
If I knew it all
I’d be dead as well
By such truth
Too immense
All I can say
Together
We’ve walked
Through the path of history
The joy is you are there yet
Where we’ll eventually
Again have met.
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© Dulce ..................................................................................................IMAGE: 6 Strings to Heaven (Deviantart)
20 comments:
Dulce- I guess it's wherever you find it. You write a beautiful itinerary. ~rick
wonderful, the sense of longing and knowing combined and weaving together...love the picture as well.
much love
I like this one. Hope to read more as much as I can.
I love the last phrase. like it melts away time
Dulce.
Of course Honey, you miss him so--
It just was not that long ago.
Music, music and the band
Your favorite love, that man
There will ever be none other
Take the place of your brother.
The beautiful guitar photo evoked a sadness in me--it is perfect, in memory of one you love.....
So heartfelt and touching, Dulce!
Loved these lines ...
The joy is who are there yet
Where we'll eventually
Again have met.
Take care dear!
Margie
xo
Nice poem =]
So near
So far
so invigorating...wonderfully expressed views
i guess sometimes we just gotta believe...
This is nice, Dulce.
We are here but we are really out there too.
Trillions is a word that tells me there is too much to think about sometimes.
Secretia
anticipation...
very well done dear Dulce
I like the meter.
this one connects - love the connection
so poignantly beautiful, dulce - having lost my own "little" brother many many moons too early i know i truly know how you must feel - very beautifully said! very beautiful! i know how proud he is of his sister who loves him so!
I've fallen in love with this one. My favorite from you...especially the last verse. QUE BELLEZA.
Another case where if I experience it, I can only then understand.
GYPSYWOMAN knows what you know, Dulce
and you each write the most lovely words in lovely fashion.
A wonderful tribute of love.
You write better and better as days go by...
Yet every single day I feel lucky to read you;)
Don´t stop!!
El camino siempre es mejor cuando loandamos con la pèrsona que amamos, hasta cuando no está, cuánto bien nos hace sucomañía. Un besote, lindo el poema.
Oh I know this feeling Dulce...Feeling this way now :)
This is very beautiful...
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