I dedicate this poem to my dear followers J Star, Secretia and Gregorio, and also to the owner of The Succubus Restaurant where this after-dinner scene took place…
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It’s dessert time
This vanilla and chocolate
Ice cream
We lick together
Little by little
Until our tongues meet
My cold lips touch his.
Tongues dancing
With each other
We become one
Lovingly breathing
The life of him
Into me…
…so vibrant this is!
Against the sunset
Carefully he opens my bra
And a drop of melted cream
Drops on them
My breasts
And as he sucks it
I swim in the deep ocean
Of no equal pleasure
Because the warmest beauty
He seems to just find
And looks into my eyes
To check my smile,
Gratitude and sigh
Softly stroking my thighs
As I spread my legs
To his beneath
Between legs
Oh!
There’s My Prize…
And the contour of my hips
He caresses sweetly, gently
Tongues dance together again
Against this lustful sunset
And his fingers so easily find
My petal flesh
And once more he checks
The pleasure I get
Looking in my eyes
How I smile as I sigh
And his hard love muscle
Just the perfect size
For me to keep this smile
Penetrated at the right rhythm
Right time
…No rush
Getting our moment sublime
Love…
What do you mean,
How could I
…Hush…
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© Dulce
27 comments:
OMG, Dulce! I love the ice-cream scene SO much! AND...I love ice cream
And the rest of this piece who can NOT--if they are human--love?
However, here is my real comment:
(Whispering...) "hush...."
Ues...I'm still here. OMG!
Wow! But 'scuse me while I put a handful of snow in my undies! Ahhh, that's better!
Amazing! Not many followers will fail to read that poem right through to the end! Sensational, Dulce.
Oops. Sorry. Gotta go. Need more snow!
Steph ;)
Dulce, This is so erotic, I held my breath as I read it, the first two times. How could you be this good at writing? You're much better at this than any author or poet I've ever read before. I don't know how to compliment you more.
With my luck, this would be the one time the waiters would be hovering around, wanting to know if I needed more water, bread..."Miss, is there something wrong?" "No, for god's sake, something is very right!"
Makes me thing of that scene in "When Harry Met Sally" - "I'll have whatever she's having."
And make it a double!
Oh my! There's a surprise! Thanks for the shout-out, Dulce. I enjoyed the comments, too... Stephanie with her handfuls of snow, and rnsane talking about hovering waiters!
Lovely, skilled & powerful!
So glad that you visited my blog today, because it led me to read this piece today.
You are most welcome at da spiral anytime with Aloha, Friend!
Comfort Spiral
wow for sure! extremely sensual read/write! a great place to be!
Wowwwwwwww this is hottttttttt...lol
You never bore your readers.
clap clap...at da ice cream scene.
Keep writing!
Phew! This is hot! This is very very sensual! A fantastic read Dulce! Phew! Keep them coming!!!
Ah well done!
Nothing better than fabulous erotica...
much love, i've missed you...
Dessert time is obviously sizzing at "The Succubus", my dear! Wow wow wow! That was hot and just about perfectly decadent!
Nevine
:) Thanks for the dedication...This is so sexy...Cold ice cream never looked so delicious :) Love it, as always
just perfect! now please excuse me to fall into the pool....
whew...i'm glad it's like only 18 degrees outside w/snow ... i need to step out for a bit...
warm smiles,
I think I need some dessert.....
Just catching up and boom you heated up my Tuesday with ice cream, how fabulous. I LOVED it x
Whew, my glasses just fogged up. That was awesome. I could use some of that ice to cool things down myself. I think I will pick up some icecream on the way home.
Hi! Thanks for dropping by my blog and nice to meet you :)
I just took a look back through a few of your poems and they are wonderful. You paint very vivid feelings!
I adored the lines: "And looks into my eyes
To check my smile,
Gratitude and sigh. . ."
Thats the best part of love-making. Don't you agree?
Joy always,
Susan
all of a sudden I feel like having an ice cream.
~ Dulce ~
This is offically my fave poem of yours.Well done!
What a pleasure !!!
Estos poemas llenos de erotismo y sensualidad te salen perfectos!!
Ice cream and love, the best mixture?
Besos de dulce de leche:)
Pd: Me gustó verte guapa!!
I have no idea what to respond.
Dulce- I wish I were in a place where I could appreciate this but matters of the heart have taken precedence. I'll someday rediscover it. ~rick
rikkij77@yahoo.co.uk
Very nice...
Not much more to say... hot, hot, hot...
Like the passion behind it!
"and his hard love muscle, just the perfect size"....
ummm, wow! I'll take that!
Beautifully and prevocatively written.
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