All my senses
Thoroughly aware.
The lack of any of yours
Would make this so incomplete.
You are at my side
What a pride.
At your approach
My anger smiles
All human instincts set free
Everything so fine
Exquisite
Unrivalled
So cherished
With my sweetheart
Tonight
At my side
The dream of your distraction
Multiplies
This passion
My need of you
At my side.
Your light
Turns me on
Your sadness
Off and off.
It’s not a game
It’s gratitude
Even if we are not
All that happy.
Oh
At this side
My earlobe
Sucked by
Your supportive
Excitement
Secrets which
Out of this place
Would be so
Out of place
Take me there
To that so allowed
Wished
Sacred
That exact
Perfect
Never ending sentiment
Called love…
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© Dulce
26 comments:
This feeling is so beautiful isnt it :)
something so sweet about this one :)
who need a perfect love. what you have here, is just right!
Dulce, I'm thinking that the love her is tenuous, wavering a little, but that it is nearby, cooled off, and needs to be warmed up, that it looks good to others from the outside, but needs nurturing, can be great again, and is worrisome.
Secretia
And your words take me there, Dulce, as they always do. I don't know how you pump out such delicacies on a daily basis, woman... I just don't know! :-)
Nevine
perfection or reality?
i choose reality -- it's more challenging and fun!
beautiful as always Dulce,
warm smiles,
I´ll tell you this secret, my queen Nevine,
Sometimes they stand on a queue waiting to come out..
Not the case these busy days... ;)
You unleash words dipped in aphrodisiacs, I guess. I always let imagination loose while reading your work and believe me, its tremendous force.
Delicious.
Joy always,
Susan
such a fine feeling 2 be one!!
this photo stirred the heat in me to begin with LOL
Longing to feel this with him again, even though we feel it is NOT enough, and yessssssssss, how our body does speak for our minds to many times, releasing the anger into smiles, how one can soon forget the loneliness, anger, when one sees his/her face,
I surely miss being able to come online as much, but, that's life, I am glad I popped on again I needed A TINGLE LOL HEHEHEhe
HUGS ti amo dear one
I like the line "secrets which out of this place would be out of place" That says alot.
Happy New Year, dear Dulce!
So nice to be here again!
Love this poem!
It really touched me!
May 2010 bring you much joy, peace and love!
Margie
XX
Brilliant...a bit sad, never perfect, but real, raw. Love...
sweet and beautiful.
yes...i'll take one of those...imperfectly perfect
Sweeter Dulce, you have amazing words in your arsenal--like well trained soldiers who each know where to place themselves. You lead your army well, Girl.
I will save the word "awesome" for another time, or you will think it's the only descriptive word I know!
Hugs and loves....
I love " at your aproach my anger smiles " I can really relate to that line.
El amor que sentimos siempre es el perfecto amor.
Tu le cantas al amor, muy bello.
Besos:)
lovely tender poem
full of longing and sharing
The form is beautiful but is it love?
I am trying to follow so many blogs now, Dulce, I can never keep up. There are some I should read first. I am glad I didn't miss this wonderful poem of yours. You always manage to write so beautifully about love and I can't even remember love! I guess I keep hoping reading your poetry will bring back some of my memories!
This is just gorgeous in the simplicity of the feelings and the sensualness of the words.
Glad I read it...much love
g
just fabulous, dulce!!! totally!
oh, and i so know what you mean about thoughts and standing in queue to come out at times - and then not - i, myself, have been in a "not" phase the past few weeks - perhaps because of the moon phase???
D- I dated this girl! well, the angry smile part, anyway-without the love part. ~rick
Love this one... yes, the angry smile part I really relate to. Oh, how I have missed you my dear friend! So glad to be back! Hugs and kisses ;)
"my earlobe sucked by your supportive excitement" wow.
so desire the supportive
excitement only someone who
truly cares for you can deliver.
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