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Monday, January 25

YOU ARE RIGHT


And you tell me
I've got a way with words
That capture your soul...

And I say
It's you, my love.

And you say
No, it's you, honey.

No, I say
It's you.

Ok Ok

It's you
And it's me
Or maybe
It's us.

Because our words
Speak from
And to
Our hearts,
Sweetheart.

No, your
Sweet Heart...
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25 comments:

Stephanie Fey said...

Oh, I do like that! I do, I do, I do. Oh, yes, indeed! Yes, yes, yes!

Steph :)

Martin said...

Me too. Yes, yes, yes! I like that, I do. It is as it is, from the sweet heart! Your words have found the way from heart to captured soul.

Caio Fern said...

i love this . and it IS you !!

Kay said...

oh, how that made me smile, chuckle...too cute

Angeles said...

Two hearts at the same words that's Love.

Nice!! Dear Dulce!!
RE BESOS:)

Ileana said...

I love this kind of fighting! lol

Beautifully expressed, Chica!

Anonymous said...

When two people are crazy about each other like that, they bubble their compliments, it's very sweet!

Secretia

Dr.John said...

Fine expression of love.

Rick said...

Dulce- do you always have to be so contrary. No, you! ~rick

Margie said...

Sweet!
This made me smile!

Margie:)
xx

Mike said...

That was such a show of love! Great sentiment.

Caroline said...

Brilliant...love this. From my heart to yours...or yours to mine...

Deb Kirkeeide said...

Love does inspire!
I love this, so playful and sweet.

Man Named Kim said...

isn't it always you and me... the wonder is in the mix of it.

RNSANE said...

That is a very sweet poem, Dulce, a loving exchange between two pwople!

JStar said...

I LOVE this girl!!! It's him who inspires these words :) I have had Many Many muses...I guess I can thank them for the good poems they brought out in me, thats all they were good for lol

Shadow said...

love brings out the best in each other. otherwise its not love...

Anonymous said...

toooooo cute - it's like a little love bubble!

Jessie said...

a conversation i can hear in my head, because you expressed it so well...

Calli said...

You are a clever one, Dulce....and I loved how you had to have the last word ~ ha! so like a woman...;)

adorable and fun!

I like what Michelle has said, it is like a "little love bubble"
...if only we could stay in one forever!

Unknown said...

Very sweet indeed..."sweetheart!"
Hugs
Gabi

Ricardo Miñana said...

Through the words you arrives to the soul,
excellent and beautiful text.
happy week
kiss.

Jo Potter said...

Beautiful poem and very soulful.
I love poetry from the heart and this is truly from the heart!
Thank you for sharing your work.
Jo.x

Reysagrado said...

I wonder: ¿Who will win that "battle"?

It´s clear: LOVE, hihi;)

LarryG said...

mindreader!
:)
sweet!