And she collapsed...
The girl
The woman
The lady
The goddess
She believed...
She failed herself
Just by chance
After that so quick glance
For seeing him...
He ignored her
And so did she
But he saw her
As well as so did she.
Inside the huge mall
Of her heart
She lost control
Beating at an unarmed speed
Unaware she could breathe
The glance
By chance
And everything
She had declined
Vanished as ash
In the wind
And because of that
She will be
Once more back
To dreaming
Asleep or awake
All the same
About his smile
His voice
His image
His look
His figure
Yes- just a dream
But this not welcome return
She discerns...
How well she knows herself
She’ll have to start it all over again
An end well deserved
Awaits him
...
Same place.
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© Dulce
23 comments:
Dulce, You are a wise woman, you know a lot and you SAY SO MUCH!
And you say it so well. I always appreciate you.
Secretia
Dulce- yes, it's so important to see and be seen and grab that frikken moment and hold on. wise indeed. ~rick
Words from an old song come back to me:
....Well, what do you know
He smiled at me in my dreams last night--
My dreams are getting better all the time....
Nice poem Dulce, but are you not getting used to the words Nice, Marvelous, Good, Beautiful, Favorite, Lovely etc? Because they are all so true, Baybeeee!
KUTGW (acronym for Keep Up The Good Work). You are intelligent, very talented, and willing to share both, Thank you.
Oh my...this just speaks to my heart. I feel like I could have written this (well, not like this...). Mmmm...going back for another read...
There is nothing you write, Dulce, that is not excellent. I always check here before I head elsewhere!
This is very intelligent! It is hard to display both the perspectives. Great work!!!
simply beautiful.
I know this feeling all tooooo well...and you visualized so well...Like I was there feeling this way...
well written as always and captured that moment pretty well through your words.keep writing!!
Starting again can be interesting but a little scary. I think it is the unknown that makes life interesting.
how quickly the memories can overtake... and they do...
very well said -- we have all experienced this, and for some of us it never goes away.
happy new year dear Dulce!!!
warms smiles and hugs,
i admire the rhythm of this ... i am talking the sibject and the way it was writen giving the perfect feeling to it .
i too like th hythm of this...and feel the cool touch of memory like this.
Lovely, just lovely m'dear. :)
How easily we deceive ourselves! But we always realize it, even as we're doing it... I love your last stanza!
Nevine
Interesting. Because I live with the only one I have ever loved it has never happened to me.
Wow! Love at first glance, so it seems! Yesss! It is always so fascinating.
She is not weak. She is open, vulnerable and heartfelt.
Same place perhaps, but you can always move forward from there!
Kim
round and round the haunted cycle goes...round and round
dearest dulce,
your blog is a piece of art.
best of luck and thanks for sharing it with all of us.
wish you the very best.
Thank you so much my friends for such beautiful comments... I feel so pleased and blessed!
So many of have been there... very well written!!
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