Silly me
I told you to make up your mind
I had nothing to lose
What a fool
Now that I don’t have you
I feel I lost it all too soon
It’s raining
While the sun’s shining
And I am not crazy
All lights are too bright
To see or gaze
My eyes only cried this way
When I was a babe
I can not open them
But keep then close in tears
Of darkness
Sadness
Misery
Silly me
I opened my heart
So wide
That I pulled the doors out
By the roots
So I could miss not
A single breeze of our love
How long will that take
To be mended and replaced
If only they had been made of glass
That would have helped me see
Where I am right now
Now I am here right now
And am not crazy
But it keeps raining
And the sun is shining
Mother Nature
Always so wise.
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© Dulce
20 comments:
Those are the biggest and most plentiful of tears. You expressed the loss of love, the empty hurting.
Secretia
(((((( Dulce )))))) Your pain is clearly expressed through these lonesome words. I'm so sorry to read of your hurt, your tears. Bless your heart, dear.
Sending gentle hugs your way!
Just wanted to let you know I left you a little gift on my blog... but you have already received one from Tabitha. Guess this shows how well you are thought of in this blog community! Hugs my dear!
Ohhhh Dulce, hun... my heart aches for you!
Tears so needed. So necessary. Let them fall...I send your inner child the biggest hug possible. I know that hurt.
I love you my friend.
and btw~ I so love your friend inky's quote you have posted in your left side bar...true, true words.
This one is extremely powerful Dulce!!
Thank you for visiting with me today. It's always a pleasure to have your drop in and leave me one of your sweet comments.
Ah, Dulce - BIGGG HUG! - You will see the sun again. Stay strong my beautiful friend!
Oh so very sad, Dulce :(
My heart goes out to you!
Margie
xo
Such beautifully expressed despair. If you feel this way I am so sorry! Feel better. x
That's very hard.
Lleva tiempo volver a ver el sol, pero recuerda que no se ha ido, todo pasa y esto también pasará.
Besos a tu Dulce alma:)
Dulce- my comment got lost. crappy computer. Anyway, I said that we always think if only...when the truth is they would have left anyway. Truth is, they were already gone. And that I liked your passion here. I felt clenched fists and tight muscles fron arms through the neck. Same ol rain-same ol tears. Same ol pain in my soul. ~rick
I too feel your pain....the sun shining emphasizes your pain even more. Stay strong ok. Sarah
Thank you so much for your sweet support my friends... it really helps me to start it over again, somehow, some way, some...say-
one of these days.
xo
"Maybe I'm not crazy,
Just inconsolable"
--Jonatha Brooke, "Inconsolable"
Such sad words you have been writing lately. Very moving.
Beautiful rhythms, Dulce. And the rhythms in poetry are so important. I especially liked the conclusion with your reference to weather and its symbolism. Strong, strong stuff indeed. Yes, indeed it is sad, but you give your sadness a voice and a shape - as soon as you start to shape it, you begin to understand it. You're a true poet. In the heart as well as in language!
Steph x
Cheer up, Sweetie!!
Warm hugs:)
really sweet but plenty full of tears poetry,..
god bless
CHeers!
I feel your pain girl...
mmmmm...."If only they had been made of glass
That would have helped me see
Where I am right now"
moments like that, guess it doesn't help when saying 'better to have loved and lost than to have not of loved at all'...
moments like that...hopefully are few and far between...
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