I cannot take this lightly.
That menacing storm
On the horizon
Quoting my wisdom
Mist caressing the mountains
Bless my existence
And presumption
Trust and devotion
Why do you love me?
Knowing your answer
So attached
Caring support
Which gets more and more
Rather than less and less
So it used to
Consoling the soul
I thrive on your words
Of delight
Your kiss
Your whisper
The former mess
So tidy now
I treasure
Because of your trust
And devotion.
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© Dulce
19 comments:
What treasure!! Very sweet !!
Besos:)
"trust and devotion", essential in a meaningful relationship... such a jewel this poem is! As you are such a sweet gem as well, Dulce!
Thanks for not "taking it lightly"
So much meaning in that line!
Secretia
Trust in a relationship will help you climb any mountain, no matter how high...
This is almost spiritual in its beauty, both from nature, and from inside. And the passion, though quiet, is palpable! :-)
Nevine
Love this one!
Beautifully written, Dulce!
Beautiful poem, we just need to trust us to be what we really are. A kiss.,
nor can any of us reading this "take it lightly" - beautiful!
I love this. Beautiful.
I really like that picture too :)
<3
Nice writing about being swept away a little at a time. Very pretty.
CR
Very nice!
Dulce, this is such a warm and loving poem...as you are warm and loving!
mmmmmm, beautiful
love can do a lot to heal many things...
much love
Trust and devotion work their magic and make everything all better. What a beautiful treasure.
Hmmmm problem with treasure is someone is always tryin to steal it. Sleep with one eye open. ~rick
breathtaking...
Again...another beautiful poem.
The former mess
So tidy now
I treasure
Because of your trust
And devotion.
You end this piece so well.
A lovely read.
This is beautiful, Dulce.
Just beautiful...and tender.
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