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Tuesday, January 19

TREASURE



I cannot take this lightly.


That menacing storm

On the horizon

Quoting my wisdom


Mist caressing the mountains

Bless my existence

And presumption


Trust and devotion


Why do you love me?

Knowing your answer


So attached

Caring support

Which gets more and more

Rather than less and less


So it used to


Consoling the soul

I thrive on your words

Of delight

Your kiss

Your whisper


The former mess

So tidy now

I treasure

Because of your trust

And devotion.

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© Dulce

19 comments:

Angeles said...

What treasure!! Very sweet !!
Besos:)

Anonymous said...

"trust and devotion", essential in a meaningful relationship... such a jewel this poem is! As you are such a sweet gem as well, Dulce!

Anonymous said...

Thanks for not "taking it lightly"

So much meaning in that line!

Secretia

JStar said...

Trust in a relationship will help you climb any mountain, no matter how high...

Nevine Sultan said...

This is almost spiritual in its beauty, both from nature, and from inside. And the passion, though quiet, is palpable! :-)

Nevine

Margie said...

Love this one!
Beautifully written, Dulce!

El Drac said...

Beautiful poem, we just need to trust us to be what we really are. A kiss.,

GYPSYWOMAN said...

nor can any of us reading this "take it lightly" - beautiful!

Isha Ethera said...

I love this. Beautiful.
I really like that picture too :)
<3

Anonymous said...

Nice writing about being swept away a little at a time. Very pretty.

CR

The Urban Cowboy said...

Very nice!

RNSANE said...

Dulce, this is such a warm and loving poem...as you are warm and loving!

Stacey J. Warner said...

mmmmmm, beautiful

love can do a lot to heal many things...

much love

Ileana said...

Trust and devotion work their magic and make everything all better. What a beautiful treasure.

Rick said...

Hmmmm problem with treasure is someone is always tryin to steal it. Sleep with one eye open. ~rick

Anonymous said...

breathtaking...

Caroline said...

Again...another beautiful poem.

Marcia M said...

The former mess

So tidy now

I treasure

Because of your trust

And devotion.


You end this piece so well.
A lovely read.

Calli said...

This is beautiful, Dulce.

Just beautiful...and tender.