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Thursday, January 14

WORDLESS WORDS





Everyday's
Just another day
It just
Gets worse

Tried with words
It just
Gets worse

Nothing works

So, please
Do not ask
It's alright
No need to discuss

I'm
It's just
... fine.
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29 comments:

Nikki (Sarah) said...

this reminds me of 'the more the words...the less the meaning.' Stay strong Dulce.

Heather Mattern said...

Dont let it get you down, keep writing!!

Maude Lynn said...

Beautifully written.

JStar said...

I am feeling this way as we speak...Words are just words to some...and when your words arent taken seriously or for granted, whats the point...

Anonymous said...

Well said, Dulce, well said!

Secretia

Stephanie Fey said...

Don't we all feel that way sometimes? Especially with blogging! One of these days I'll be as expressive and as succinct as you. Yeah, right!

Beautifully executed, Dulce.

Steph x

steveroni said...

Sweeter Dul. again, your words--so few--are placed so well...as to make your point.

However, after reading you since when, August?, I cannot believe you are this depressed person. Well, maybe for one yesterday? I hope you are not often--and pray that today sees the usually happy Dul.

Sweeter day to you, Sweet!

GYPSYWOMAN said...

the beauty of sweet nothin's - and no one says them better!!!

Angeles said...

Estos tiempos que parecen tan perdidos quizás sean los más productivos, poder ser a pesar de ellos nos hace Ser.
If you are, all is OK.
Besos:)

Jessie said...

your few words always hold such power -- an honest power --

hugs and warm smiles to you Dear Dulce,

Man Named Kim said...

sounds much like we have had similar days of late...

Namaste'

Nevine Sultan said...

Oh, Dulce. I hope you're not really down. And if you are, well, you'll hopefully be fine by tomorrow... Hopefully. Now smile! :-)

Nevine

Anonymous said...

urgh! FINE JUST FINE - tell yourself - tell the world but most really know the truth.
I wrote a very similar poem a while back.
xx

Reysagrado said...

Remember that there is always Light after Dark. Keep believing, Sweet!

However, I agree with you: sometimes silence is the best choice to turn it better.

Stacey J. Warner said...

Dulce, I hope these are just words and not a reflection of your mood.

If not, than lots of love to you...

much love

Rick said...

D- well, at least you've set the bar low. You are always so sharp and crisp, like a cold wind down the neck. It can't be ignored. ~rick

Dr.John said...

Thids one I understand. I've been there.

Fireblossom said...

sings: mama told me there'd be days like this, there'd be days like this, my mama said...

Ileana said...

Sometimes we have to let the silence work its magic, Chica. Oh, yeah...

S. Susan Deborah said...

There is a kind of resignation resonating here. Is it true?

Words can mislead many times.

Take care.

Wishing you joy and peace,
Susan

Margie said...

Dear Dulce,
Take care my friend and be kind to yourself!

Margie
xx

Arnav said...

There are so many times, when we are a storm rises in our mind yet we reflect the most composed face, I guess this is unique to us humans...

Lovely poem :)

Keep Writing :)
I really liked your blog thus I am blog rolling you :)

Jon said...

it's not altogether fine though, is it? especially not in Haiti...

Josephine said...

Days liken that,,, oh, well, they happen...

Caio Fern said...

days like this ... i was so used to then ...
you're very precise when wants to express yourself . i like that .

have a great weekend Dulce !!

Eileen Astels Watson said...

This reminds me of January blues, something I'm experiencing right now too. may the sun start shining soon!

Shadow said...

i'm fine is my standard answer. just as i know that's not always the truth, i know yours aren't either... very well said, dulce!!!

island of peace said...

a deep feeling of sadness is enveloping the poem.

be happy once more.

Superfluous Brunette said...

Isn't it so true. The more you try to discuss, explain, clear it up, the worse it gets. And the more frustrating and hurtful it is.

I have somewhat learned to just say less and let it go.

Keep strong!