Give me some time
To keep away from the
Unwelcome suffering.
Give me a time
To place things
Where they used to be.
That’ll take time.
Give me time
To stop
To accept
This fantasy
This fun
This dream
So dark
So neat
About to leave...
Give me time
To get there
Where facts
Keep on their way
Going and getting
Nowhere
As they’ve always.
Take your time
To look in my eyes
And see
After all
My heart
Was always broken
Long before
You offered me
Your time.
Come and see
The dream is just a dream
Give in, give up, give away
Give all, give none
No hope
No expectation
Give time its time
To get rid of time
Space
And hell.
Give me a time
To learn how to stand
On my feet again
When I danced
So free
So many nights
In the big blue lie.
You and your peace
Me and my tease.
It’s time
We gave ourselves the time
To give ourselves
The same nothing
Of our yester days.
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22 comments:
I am sorry I can't come to the phone right now as I am preoccupied at the moment and for quite some time into the for seeable future spending time with a friend.
if anybody has something to say about me spending time at a canary island, not only will you not have any canned soup but you can also get fuct.
soon dulce, fairly soon call me tomorrow after 5 and I'll be able to give you an exact time
Time is not the solution for our problems... Time give us the chance to make it better and get over it...
But, in the end, it is up to us...
Kisses from my Soul, Sweetie:)
Oor lives were unhurried before we owned out first wrist watch.
Secretia
Dulce have you given up with your boyfriend, this one for whom you have written a multitude of fine words and inserted photos? How (not "WHY" quickly?
It takes so long a time to fall in love (3 minutes?--grin!) and so quickly we can fall out of it.
Time is finally the great healer for those who do not have a Friend so powerful, they call Him GOD!
Take Care!
You WILL get through this--in time.
Maybe by Thursday? Probably this is the BEST poem you have written --maybe ever? At least for the past few weeks!
'give me time.' you write with powerful emotions...I feel it...hey and Dulce...your words to me on my blog...touch me...you're the best...the absolute best...stay strong...and always stay safe...Sarah
beautifully poignant words, dulce!
Take the time dear Dulce. One needs it. Time to spend with oneself.
Joy always,
Susan
take time to know and love yourself, only then can you truly love someone else.
beautifully done Dulce,
i used to consider time to be my worst enemy. he's now my biggest friend... wonderful expression here dulce!
Loved this poem!
To fully relax in a relationship...¿es posible?
Love the hope and emotion in this one, Chica! Te felicito.
You're being introspective in your poetry these day, Dulce. And I can feel an agony seeping from between the words. Still, writing liberates all agonies, whether the writing is about us or others. It doesn't really matter, at the end of the day, because we are liberated. Love you, girl!
Nevine
Time, time, time ...
Time is a healer ...
Time can be such a good friend!
Wonderfully expressed!
Margie :)
x
ahhh yes, it would be nice to escape suffering. I for one, as you know, tend to induce suffering where none is really needed :)
I have often read suffering is our greatest teacher. So maybe this is a time to learn more about you and connect to you. That elusive connection we are always looking for out there, may really be the connection we need to have with ourselves.
Much love!
Dulce, I swear our lives are parallel…You speak the words that are locked deep in my heart…Every time I read something you have written, I think, I could have written this…But not like you at all…You speak my heart with such grace!!! This poem speaks to me…About my sweetheart…He waited for me to heal patiently and was there to pick me up when I fell…
Oh it’s funny that you have Walt Whitman on your page, a few years ago I did a genealogy of my family history and he is in my family tree, along with other historical writers :)
Querida Dulce... toma mi tiempo, te lo regalo. compartamos tiempo y palabras, como hasta ahora. Hermoso versos amiga mía. besitos!!!
I am sorry that this is not relevant to your wondeful poetry but Liam asked me to let you know that he and Kirsten had a little boy on the sixth of February adn called him Ian. God bless 'em.x
it's so quick andeasy to fall in love but to forget that certainone is torture, that's exactly when time is our greatest enemy
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Enjoy x
Simply beautiful! ♥
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I love this heart LAura
Thank you all and each one of you for stopping by and for such lovely comments and advice...on this piece I like especially... do not know why!!!
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Dulce
if time we could hold in our hands and manipulate. like knee deep in the ocean trying to stop waves. they dont care for our wants.
the same nothing saddens me.
~rick
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