I am longing
For that feeling
Where every moment
Is the best and first...
I am searching
For that moment
When love
Is given back at request...
I am waiting
For that love
While these seconds fly
Like specks seen
Against the sunset light....
I am longing
For that feeling
Where every moment
Is the best and first...
I am searching
For that moment
When love
Is given back at request...
I am waiting
For that love
While these seconds fly
Like specks seen
Against the sunset light....
10 comments:
Fabulous!
Ya know Dulce, I believe of the three--longing, searching, waiting--the key member is "searching". Because, if I search, I may one day "find"...whereas I might be otherwise "waiting and longing" forever...Search is the action word.
Actually, I love this poem, though I'd guess it is not the love of God of which you are writing, but of human-which IS a "taste of God".
PEACE.
Take Care.
Waiting like that, we all know how that feels. Thanks for writing this!
Secretia
Hermoso, realmente hermoso querida amiga. Besos mil!!!
Dulce:
Bazoom! This post reappeared. It wasn't there when I came in before. It said 'the page you were looking for does not exist.'
Sometimes the longing and waiting take up a lot of energy than the process of living a life of love. But even then it's a sweet feeling. I am sure you are enjoying the longing.
Joy always,
Susan
Dulce, only in poetry do you ever long....I know that love always is lying just around the corner for you!!!
Ya encontrará el tiempo, el amor siempre busca al amante, pero..hay que poner el corazón en 0, para que algo nuevo pueda entrar.
Besos:)
Beautiful image to go with your poetry. I'm inspired to sketch something like that...(painting on the right). Who's it by?
PS - Wishing you for the sweetest of moments...todo lo mejor para mi "prima." lol
No, en serio...te deseo mucha felicidad, amiguita linda. :)
I am still waiting for this feeling of love to be return as I give it...This is why I write these words down into poetry...Something I longed for but never felt...Until now :) His word fills that emptiness that once ached...
This poem is a reflection of what my heart is feeling! You nailed it again Dulce :)
Dulce-every time i've looked for it to come back, it never did. Same ol rain
~rick
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