Have I lost fear
Of the other side?
From now forth...
I'll be one and only
As long as I am here
I'll stay
Maybe even pray.
Although some times...
Honesty is such a rainbow
Truth a whirlwind.
Although sometimes
Dawn might seem
Not ever again to come.
Although sometimes
That tomorrow is so dark
And then I could not say
I am here to stay
even if I prayed.
Although sometimes
Guilt comes to kill
Fright my best enemy
Hatred my only sanity.
I'll have to stay
Be one and only
Even though
As long as I am here
There's not much
Nothing real...
And although sometimes
I still hope to find
Things I did not know I had
From now forth...
I'll make no promises.
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24 comments:
Darkest one I've read. But excellent.
I like these words ...
*I'll be one and only
As long as I am here
I'll stay
Maybe even pray*
Hope you are faring well my friend from beautiful Spain.
Sometimes your poems are so intense and deep and sad too that I feel for you!
Hugs!
Margie
Praying that you are felling good. The poem is a strong statement. You never have to make any promises. You don't have to think long term. Every day does not need to be planned, plotted, mapped.
Secretia
Brilliant, just brilliant...I especially enjoyed the lines,
"Although sometimes
Dawn might seem
Not ever again to come" - powerful, subtle and haunting.
There is so much confusion in the thoughts... it's so real. It's like our minds when we're not quite sure where we want to go with something... what we want to do with it. It reads exactly like that! And it is not at all to be labeled "Nothing special". Woman, what in the world were you thinking. How about "Something special" instead? Love you, Sweetest. ;-)
Hugs,
Nevine
I like this very much. You are brilliant with words and a very kind support thank you.
Dark but not hopeless. There's always a little promise in everything you write. It's comforting.
Amor y paz, niña. xo
i'll make no promisses too .
but the way you wrote is fantastic and very bold .
Sweeter Poet. In US, as we wish to know what another is thinking, we say
"A penny for your thoughts!"
You have written here a few Euros' worth of thinking. I agree (who cannot?) with Nevine...Label should read "SOMETHING SPECIAL". OK?
I did not see a lot of darkness here, only randon thoughts tied together with "...although sometimes".
Take care, girl
Dulce
I saw threats to what I don't know. But your mind is so deep it scares me when I try to hard to look in. Dont know how far the fall is. But the weaving of the words are always beautiful. not just sometimes. ~rick
Dulce:
We still make promises because we believe and trust.
Dulce, you know life is all about falling, rising, promising, loving and feeling (in different order).
Hope you are feeling better after emitting these lovely words.
Take care :)
Joy and love always,
Susan
take a deep breath and smile...
(that's what they tell me)...
hugs,
must be the new moon, all these dark thoughts...
This sounds like my struggles with this world...All the troubles that come with it make you hardened...But having faith keeps you strong enough to withstand...Praying gives you strength you never knew you had?
As long as I am here
I'll stay
Maybe even pray*
Like Margie I really love these lines. They speak to me. x This is one my favourites from you.
Las sombras siempre andan rondando pero TU estás llena de luz y sin promesas brillas.
Besos:)
http://williamm51.blogspot.com/2010/03/blog-promotions-dulce.html
CONGRATULATIONS DEAR YOU HAVE BEEN PROMOTED XXX
Eres brillante amiga mía, y tus poemas besos del alma. Un abrazo!!!
What we see in the dark is not real...only monsters that feel real. Sometimes it does feel more comfortable there "hatred your only sanity", but it's not sane, perhaps just familiar.
Wherever you are in the light or in the dark, I will meet you there so you will never be alone!
this sounds like the thoughts that constantly play in my head....
Es mejor no hacer promesas...Todo cambia tanto...
Un beso.
Dulce:
Hope all is well. Where are you? Love always. Kisses to your son.
Susan
Sempre procuramos a essência das coisas, a verdade e a honestidade. Muito profundo e bonito. Acho que o pior é mesmo isso. Tão difícil é encontrá-las neste mundo corrupto dos nossos dias que só podemos mesmo procurar dentro da nossa alma! Muitos beijos para ti, linda Dulce!
Things will definitely get better... even if it's impossible to see that from this point. I really hope you are doing nice things for yourself and that your poetry is far darker than your reality. BIGGG Hug from across the pond!!
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