What is this I see?
A false sense of reality
Windows
With no shutters
No blinds
No glass
Darkness from blue to black
A scream at my back
Dreaming of
A tender love
Undying love
Burning in vain
And God in the corner
Observes
And says
Here is the day
Get back
From that black...
Take a look at the mirror
Its glass
Get back
And just smile.
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18 comments:
There is nothing better than to do than smile. Great one my friend. You are such a great poet :)
totally agree wtih Thom..."you are such a great poet."
There'a always hope...and love and you write about them so well!
Adoro tu poesía.
yeah, smile.... i'm gonna do just that until the moon's in sync with me again, heee heee heee
I LOVE this Dulce! Being happy and free is a choice...Get out of the "dark" and find the light!
Dulce
could we choose
the one or the other
I wonder would we regret our choice either way. My smile stays uneasy. Nice write again.
~rick
smile and love yourself first, the rest will come
warm smiles,
Does really God wants to save us? Or we will spend the rest of the years in dark?
Who knows?
Good day.
So is it better to be lucky or smart? better to be lucky or lovely?
I just love it when my reflection is smiling back at me... a true, genuine, big one :) lovely
I love the idea of the mirror in this, reflecting.
You write these so effortlessly!
Brilliant. I am going back to read this again...and let it really sink in. xoxo
Empezar de nuevo con una sonrisa es una fórmula infalible, siempre es de buena suerte, la vida nos da un nuevo día, just smile:):)
Besos:))))))))))))
I think "luck" is simply "chance" and if I am LUCKY, it is because first, I have worked for something, and second (like Shadow would say) the planets, stars and the moon are in alignment--WAIT! That's LUCK, is it not? --grin!
Take Care, Canary-Peep
Dulce, is that you up in the top left? Woman, you are stunningly gorgeous!!! I mean, if that's you... I mean.
Okay, now this!
I love "windows with no shutters/no blinds/no glass". I love that image! And then the mirror... glass! You're a treat, Dulce. And yes, I'm smiling... :-)
Nevine
it's a kind message dulce
Than you for your visit. Some times i translate my poems into english, but not always. Just to take an idea the poem you saw in the page you visited could be translated in:
After years
Dense Fog
Surrounds me,
I expected this,
But how to hold my life with split hands,
Lost in the shadows?
By the side, lies fallen,
The old man I saw in my dream
How he smiled to me,
Showing his small yellow teeth,
I thought he was dying,
I shuddered,
But I woke up not,
I kept on silent, until he fell on the ground
and was left so,
Without a soul,
Dark stain in the muddy street,
In an inaccessible serenity.
Souls were coming back
In the underworld,
In the dark hall reception,
Silently,
There's no sound of orchestras and voices of songs
There, statues keep silense,
All their stares are cold,
Like ice.
Tomorrow darkness will dawn again.
Good day.
Que tu sonrisa perdure por siempre amiga mía. Preciosos versos. Besitos!!!
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