So much
All this love
So much love all this love
And love is all that is
So much
All this kissing
With all that love of yours
And I
Letting myself go
On and on
This love
Heart of gold
Where were you before
So much
All this kissing
And this mixing
Confusing bodies
As we lie
Or stand
On love
In complete
So much peace
This used to be
Just a dream
Now
Look at me
I am your sun
I am the one
So lucky
And sweet.
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22 comments:
no one makes poems about love like you Dulce, one day your gonna make history ;)
p.s. your not the lucky one, he is!
Live is grand. This is just perfect. :)
Yes, he is the lucky one. And I would like to be him.
How blessed is the one who is the recipient of all your love and passion!!!
beautiful.
I feel good reading how the person in this poem feels so good, so thanks for those good feelings!
Secretia
So sweet Dulce :)
typically, 'love' is one of those words i avoid in poems. is tends to be a short cut, or a cop-out, when we fail to express something more specific, more unique. 'love' doesn't render the same meaning to us all - it's too general. HOWEVER, i do like what you have done with it here. you have, in fact used that to affect a message.
Suerte la mía, por haberme topado con tus versos. Un abrazo cielo!!!!
Dearest Dulce, thank you so much for the lovely compliment. i have found the award you have honored me with, and i will post it today.
you have a beautiful and fullfilling love poem here. there's some guy out there who is truly lucky.
hugs & smiles,
j
Hmmm... Dulce. Love love love... he's the lucky one, I say! ;-)
Nevine
Dulce:
If Love be the order of life, no words but yours can do justice to it.
Love always,
Susan
Nicely done, Dulce!
Sweeter Dulce,
What ever it is that is causing life to "have it's way" with you, possibly God is having more to do with it, than Luck.
Take care!
This one makes me want to fall in love again and again and again. :)
El amor es divino, un placer...y tu eres una poeta divina y es un placer conocerte por medio de tu "blog."
Loved it!
Especially enjoyed these words ...
Now
Look at me
I am your sun
I am the one
So lucky
And sweet.
Yes, you are sweet and he is lucky!
Margie :)
that is so beautiful...
i wish, i wish....
Incredibly beautiful and extremely sweet...I LOVE IT! :-)
really beautifully said, as is always the case over here, dulce!!! love the lines "i am the sun - i am the one" - love it!!!
I think love is all around us, isn´t it?;)
its so much finer to read you now, Dulce as I glance over to your face, your demeanor. There's something there that wants to know why. I like this picking at scabs. So much love. ~rick
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