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Monday, March 8

Sweeter Love





So much

All this love

So much love all this love

And love is all that is


So much

All this kissing

With all that love of yours


And I

Letting myself go

On and on


This love

Heart of gold

Where were you before


So much

All this kissing

And this mixing

Confusing bodies


As we lie

Or stand

On love

In complete

So much peace

This used to be

Just a dream


Now

Look at me

I am your sun

I am the one


So lucky

And sweet.

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22 comments:

Anonymous said...

no one makes poems about love like you Dulce, one day your gonna make history ;)

p.s. your not the lucky one, he is!

Anonymous said...

Live is grand. This is just perfect. :)

Martin said...

Yes, he is the lucky one. And I would like to be him.

RNSANE said...

How blessed is the one who is the recipient of all your love and passion!!!

Shelley said...

beautiful.

Anonymous said...

I feel good reading how the person in this poem feels so good, so thanks for those good feelings!

Secretia

JStar said...

So sweet Dulce :)

Man Named Kim said...

typically, 'love' is one of those words i avoid in poems. is tends to be a short cut, or a cop-out, when we fail to express something more specific, more unique. 'love' doesn't render the same meaning to us all - it's too general. HOWEVER, i do like what you have done with it here. you have, in fact used that to affect a message.

SILVIA said...

Suerte la mía, por haberme topado con tus versos. Un abrazo cielo!!!!

Jessie said...

Dearest Dulce, thank you so much for the lovely compliment. i have found the award you have honored me with, and i will post it today.

you have a beautiful and fullfilling love poem here. there's some guy out there who is truly lucky.

hugs & smiles,
j

Nevine Sultan said...

Hmmm... Dulce. Love love love... he's the lucky one, I say! ;-)

Nevine

S. Susan Deborah said...

Dulce:

If Love be the order of life, no words but yours can do justice to it.

Love always,
Susan

Maude Lynn said...

Nicely done, Dulce!

steveroni said...

Sweeter Dulce,
What ever it is that is causing life to "have it's way" with you, possibly God is having more to do with it, than Luck.
Take care!

Ileana said...

This one makes me want to fall in love again and again and again. :)

El amor es divino, un placer...y tu eres una poeta divina y es un placer conocerte por medio de tu "blog."

Margie said...

Loved it!

Especially enjoyed these words ...
Now
Look at me
I am your sun
I am the one

So lucky
And sweet.

Yes, you are sweet and he is lucky!

Margie :)

katrin said...

that is so beautiful...
i wish, i wish....

Art Is Life, Life Is Art said...

Incredibly beautiful and extremely sweet...I LOVE IT! :-)

GYPSYWOMAN said...
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GYPSYWOMAN said...

really beautifully said, as is always the case over here, dulce!!! love the lines "i am the sun - i am the one" - love it!!!

Reysagrado said...

I think love is all around us, isn´t it?;)

Rick said...

its so much finer to read you now, Dulce as I glance over to your face, your demeanor. There's something there that wants to know why. I like this picking at scabs. So much love. ~rick