We bathe in moistened
Pure water...
Fragrant oils...
This togetherness
This spring
All of a sudden
This warmth.
Gazing at each other
No need to prove
We love each other
One more than the other.
Holding me closer
You know
When you touch me
I am filled
And words need not
To be uttered
But do please
Whisper it again.
You are so delicate
I am so fragile.
This is here for eternity.
Stars shine
In this water
Of our love
Both leaning over
To feel our kiss
So tender, so smooth
This sweet surrender.
Leading us to past and future
Despite the slow pace
As far, as near
As those starts
Which smile at our grace
Our balm.
Just the rhythm of our souls
I’ll be your sun
Even though the day is done.
Fear of death
Disappears
When you are this near.
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20 comments:
ahh...deep sigh...
beautiful
So it is now that the old "Erotic Wednesday" has been traded for the new and welcomed "Sensual Wednesday"??
Dulce, for me, your best writings are inspired by LOVE! You have a writer's special talent to bring another along with you into that farthest of eternity's blissful harmony, peacefulness, and you do this with exquisiteness.
I believe love--true love--is the greater part of that very "image and likeness" in which mamy claim we humans were created.
There is a wondrous sense here of renewed feeling that everything is aright with you, and the universe
in which you live. Happy Blessings!
Take care.
Oh, this is truly lovely!
It went straight to my heart!
So tender, so sweet!
So loved it dear Dulce!
One of your best!
Margie :)x
i'm just starting to get obsessed to reading these poems every single day! your poetry is so addictive! :-D
Making love in a private hot tub after luxurious soaking in scented bath oils and then followed by a full body massage and mabye some more love making. Where do I sign up for this special "spa package"?
Secretia
wow loved this dear, u are good, the images always match the work, bravo xx
love this part...
"Leading us to past and future
Despite the slow pace
As far, as near
As those starts
Which smile at our grace
Our balm."
Dulce-hmm I like the idea of water and love blended as one. Nice journey here. ~rick
Love this part especially..
" Stars shine
In this water
Of our love
Both leaning over
To feel our kiss "
Dulce,
Sometimes reading your writing is like a nice little escape and other times a place I find myself
looking inside myself for answers.
And reflect.
Lovely as always.
Txo
"I’ll be your sun
Even though the day is done."
Love is like that I guess -- coaxing and being when everything else seems to fade.
The best verse is the verse of love: Any form of love and that's so well expressed here.
Your place will make people fall in love and remain there until . . .
Joy always,
Susan
Wao what lovely poetry and i like it. thanks for sharing with us...
this poem is a balm itself!
Still writing beautiful words.
Kirsten and I have a beautiful son who was born on Feb6/ 2010 at 4am
I wanted to name him Thor but we settled for Ian
Congrats Liam dear... Liam & Ian... Beautiful names... I hope you are having a wonderful time.
Fatherhood is no doubt the most loving and wonderful of life experiences.... a bit difficult at the beginning-though...
All my blessings to you and your family
:)
wonderful , Honey ...
you write with so much sincerity that is impossible to do not feel every single word , believe and love .
thank you .
Thanks everyone for these so emotive comments
You are in my heart and soul...
Hugs
;)
:)@Liam...Soo good to see him...
Dulce, these words are so comforting and warming to the heart :)
Yes, I did not notice...it is so good to have Liam back on the blogs!
Rock-A-By-Baby!
PEACE!
Take Care
Beautiful... I could read your words all day.
I will have to write this out in a letter for my husband to read on our next soaking together.
awesome. very well written.
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