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Wednesday, March 24

Loving Balm



We bathe in moistened

Pure water...

Fragrant oils...

This togetherness

This spring

All of a sudden

This warmth.


Gazing at each other

No need to prove

We love each other

One more than the other.


Holding me closer

You know

When you touch me

I am filled

And words need not

To be uttered

But do please

Whisper it again.


You are so delicate

I am so fragile.


This is here for eternity.


Stars shine

In this water

Of our love

Both leaning over

To feel our kiss

So tender, so smooth

This sweet surrender.


Leading us to past and future

Despite the slow pace

As far, as near

As those starts

Which smile at our grace

Our balm.


Just the rhythm of our souls

I’ll be your sun

Even though the day is done.


Fear of death

Disappears

When you are this near.

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20 comments:

Jessie said...

ahh...deep sigh...

beautiful

steveroni said...

So it is now that the old "Erotic Wednesday" has been traded for the new and welcomed "Sensual Wednesday"??

Dulce, for me, your best writings are inspired by LOVE! You have a writer's special talent to bring another along with you into that farthest of eternity's blissful harmony, peacefulness, and you do this with exquisiteness.

I believe love--true love--is the greater part of that very "image and likeness" in which mamy claim we humans were created.

There is a wondrous sense here of renewed feeling that everything is aright with you, and the universe
in which you live. Happy Blessings!

Take care.

Margie said...

Oh, this is truly lovely!
It went straight to my heart!
So tender, so sweet!
So loved it dear Dulce!
One of your best!

Margie :)x

Anonymous said...

i'm just starting to get obsessed to reading these poems every single day! your poetry is so addictive! :-D

Anonymous said...

Making love in a private hot tub after luxurious soaking in scented bath oils and then followed by a full body massage and mabye some more love making. Where do I sign up for this special "spa package"?

Secretia

william manson said...

wow loved this dear, u are good, the images always match the work, bravo xx

Man Named Kim said...

love this part...

"Leading us to past and future
Despite the slow pace
As far, as near
As those starts
Which smile at our grace
Our balm."

Rick said...

Dulce-hmm I like the idea of water and love blended as one. Nice journey here. ~rick

Tabitha.Montgomery said...

Love this part especially..

" Stars shine

In this water

Of our love

Both leaning over

To feel our kiss "

Dulce,
Sometimes reading your writing is like a nice little escape and other times a place I find myself
looking inside myself for answers.
And reflect.
Lovely as always.
Txo

S. Susan Deborah said...

"I’ll be your sun

Even though the day is done."

Love is like that I guess -- coaxing and being when everything else seems to fade.

The best verse is the verse of love: Any form of love and that's so well expressed here.

Your place will make people fall in love and remain there until . . .

Joy always,
Susan

Short poetry Sms said...

Wao what lovely poetry and i like it. thanks for sharing with us...

Shadow said...

this poem is a balm itself!

Liam said...

Still writing beautiful words.

Kirsten and I have a beautiful son who was born on Feb6/ 2010 at 4am

I wanted to name him Thor but we settled for Ian

Dulçe ♥ said...

Congrats Liam dear... Liam & Ian... Beautiful names... I hope you are having a wonderful time.
Fatherhood is no doubt the most loving and wonderful of life experiences.... a bit difficult at the beginning-though...
All my blessings to you and your family
:)

Caio Fern said...

wonderful , Honey ...
you write with so much sincerity that is impossible to do not feel every single word , believe and love .
thank you .

Dulçe ♥ said...

Thanks everyone for these so emotive comments
You are in my heart and soul...

Hugs
;)

JStar said...

:)@Liam...Soo good to see him...

Dulce, these words are so comforting and warming to the heart :)

steveroni said...

Yes, I did not notice...it is so good to have Liam back on the blogs!
Rock-A-By-Baby!

PEACE!
Take Care

Angie Muresan said...

Beautiful... I could read your words all day.

I will have to write this out in a letter for my husband to read on our next soaking together.

island of peace said...

awesome. very well written.