Forever is too long a word
And a meaning
Forever... (?)
Since it all began
It’s been forever for you
And all you get to see
Never will you be
Able to live
Without him
You fool…
Forever is now
If you let your door open
When you look
On the opposite direction
And see white
Forever is when you decide
Black will never again
Be a chance
You fool…
It’s high time
You stop the tread
The wasteful search
But see yourself
Find in yourself
The only seed…
You is all you need
Forever
Now
Just…
See me!
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19 comments:
lets make it eternal till it lasts .
But see yourself
Find in yourself
The only seed…
You is all you need
Forever
Now
Powerful Dulce...very powerful...Sarah
yes, dulce! you got it right! beautifully said, as always!
Dulce, do not you wonder why some have to live foolishly in that darkness of cruelty...forever. We call it Codependency. And it is so prevalent. and for some, also...
forever!
My girl, YOU are becoming masterful at expressing the height and the depth of humanness. The more you write, the better. And I'd bet you do not "work" on these for very long.
If I did "awards" things, you would be receiving one this day.
My island friend, I couldn't agree more. i just can't say it as eloquently. Thanks~rick
Very powerful words, Dulce! You are all you need - ABSOLUTELY! Self-love and self-respect are the most important gifts we can give to ourselves.
i see you
through you
i see me
but that doesn't mean i like what i see.
yet i do like this poem
very much :)
And I feel such the fool...
i agree.
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with warmest affection,
Thank you for the wise counsel in this poem!
Secretia
That search to find out who we are and accept that is a rough one...We cling to others and what the Norm is...Until we find our OWN path and are comfortable in our own skin....and discover that what we were searching for was within us from the start...Love this Dulce :)
Keep believing, Sweetie!! Never, never, never give up!!
you have some very strong and emotional lines here dear Dulce.
nicely done!
warm smiles,
Oh to just see me...isn't that the longing of the heart...
beautiful to you today...
love to you today
peace
A profound write Dulce, a must share poem...
a lesson learned through time...
forever lovely.
La eternidad se ve desde uno mismo, no todos pueden verse.., tiempos personales que fluyen hacia un tiempo en común.
Todos nos encontraremos en ese lugar de la eternidad.
Besos:)
There are so many "forevers" in our lives... Sometimes we are too blind to see them and they stand right there by our side. I hope your friend overcomes this disillusion soon. Love.
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