All the goddesses
With their arches came
As soon as they heard her friend
Had her eyes in bubbles
Their quest
To rescue the woman
And of course the girl
Took them both out of the mash
And after a hot bath
They had a chat
Put the girl to sleep
In a safe place
And told her off
And warned her not to go out again
All by herself
In the dark
And be left in the cold
‘You are only fifteen
And that’s what they do to girls like you
With their fake charms
They use you and abuse you.’
All the goddesses sat in reunion
Around a bonfire
And burned all the rests
Of what the new fake had left
And the woman
Exhausted and silent observed
And just by looking at the eyes
Of her friends
She had it all said
But she explained
That he had said he was Hercules
And his kisses and caresses
Were the best she had felt…
And the goddesses burst out
Laughing and bending their bellies
So much sympathy
For they all know so well...
And then the woman danced around the fire
And her friends applauded
And they hugged
And she put her chin well up.
Birds are chirping
This rainy morning
Because no matter how dark
A ray will always outstand.
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© Dulce
17 comments:
I was there and I remember. Thanks for taking me back, now it's ok, but we were surprised when we though we were the only one it happened to like that.
Secretia
Very creative...
Great poem. :)
oOoo, glad to see you dancing today, Dulce! Nothing like a little calling out of the Goddesses to set things right. ;-)
I love the way you've written this, it's so immediate, I can feel the fire burning and the laughter in the air. The picture is perfect, as well.
You're not alone when you have friends.
brilliantly told! a lesson in life learnt...
Wonderful!
Love the ending ...
Birds are chirping
This rainy morning
Because no matter how dark
A ray will always outstand.
Yes!!!
Enjoy the day!
Smile and be happy!
Margie:)
xx
I'm glad you're feeling that ray of light upon you today, Dulce. This is beautifully written, with both regret for what has been done and hope for what is to come.
Warm hugs and kisses, my dear friend xoxoxoxo
I am so glad that you are starting to lift yourself up a bit. I didn't find about your sadness until way too late. But even if I had known there was little I could do but say I am sorry.
Bring it on! what cha got!? :) brilliant!
Rabbit, Rabbit
So very lovely and optimistic.
i felt like i was in a gypsy Macbeth scene. a well told tale with a moral -- very well done!
warm smiles,
every one needs goddesses as friends!
...ready to dance around the fire:)
ah, our goddess sisters! caring and loving they are! and i can hear the jingle jangle of tambourines 'round the campfire! love this, lady!
beautifully told
ah, the old Hercules line. Hey, ya know, he could've been! Lovely telling, Dulce
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