Wednesday, February 17
BETWEEN
No need to read
Between the lines
I so well know
This is all you seek
Have forgotten the times
Or the time it all began
I want much more now
Than before
Studied ways
Not on the net
But on my own appetite
Just one
This quest
How to drive
Crazy your head and
A bit down
Tween your legs
It’s not a game
But ha!
How I love the play
As you die and dive round
My spell…
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......................................................................200 followers!!!! WOW - I can't believe it... Thanks for this everyone
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Eros Wednesday Poetry,
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18 comments:
hot, hotter, hottest
seems the heat is always on here :)
joy!
Sounds like Adam one fine day said to Eve, "Hey Eve, grab an apple off this tree in my orchard, if you are so hungry."
Later Eve said to Adam, "You MUST taste this (forbidden) apple, my love, it is exquisitely good!"
Is THAT how it all began? (I love to read between the lines, but that is a secret--OR a character defective?)
Kisses to a fine writer, Dulce!
Very nice piece Dulce, this is why you have 200 followers... Your style is just like you say it is, SWEET...
"It's not a game But ha! How I love the play"...go get em! :)
I really like this one...I had to read it like three times before I put it together :) I am kinda in a similar situation :) The game is fun...but it does get old
so the girl now likes to play , hein ....
god one . and i like when i don't have to read beteen lines . this is my style :)
it is a pleasure to follow your blog honey !!
200 is just the very beggining . you will see .
I only have 114 followers. Ergo, you must be nearly twice the poet that I am!
Congratulations on your 200, you deserve it hun, you write so beautifully x
Son estupendos tus escritos, además hablas de Amor y eso se merece 200 y más seguidores. Ya verás que así será.
PD: no se que me dices de nuevo decorado??
Y para agregar a tus 200 quiero entregarte el premio creativo que hay en mi blog, en el sidebar.. a la derecha, a ti te corresponde my Sweet friend!!
Besos:)
Congratulations on your 200 followers, Dulce! See? That's quite proof of your writing abilities, Sweetest. No more needs to be said. And you know just how I love your erotic poetry. The subtlety and the plays with words and the little mind games in here. Sure you said there's no need to read between the lines, but when there are heads and legs and appetites involved, then there's always more diving in between to be done! ;-) Loved this, loved it! And oh, I love you, too! :-)
Nevine
There any many more followers coming, Dulce, when they stop by for a visit, you own them!
Secretia
Awesome! Love the 'Tween your legs' line
Congrats on the followers. :)
Dulce Sweet--I love the photo. Always did believe gloves and an apple make a woman attractive...(Did I just write that???)
"Sweeter Poetry" was an inspired name for your blog, Dulce.
Tonight at a rehearsal, the conductor at one point said to the violins to play "dulce", then he said "sweetly"..
You wrote: "Have forgotten.....
the time it all began..."
I never forget "beginnings". But I DO forget all in between the beginnings until now--and sometimes even NOW! --grin!
Congratulations on "200" I am envious...(not really--grin!).
You and your words are loved by many--and I am one of them!
seductive temptress you!!! have fun
Very sexy. I did read between the lines and you are a very naughty girl, :)
Oh Dulce, I have missed your words so much, as well as I have missed you!
you turned up the heat on this one Ms. Seductive!!!
thank you so much for leaving a sweet comment on my last post, i'm glad to hear you're in love!
warm smiles,
Dulce- Ok, first off, those are the prettiest boobs I've ever seen. Got that otta the way. Second, you know damn well I'd bite that apple everytime. Them dice would come up snake eyes again and again and yet, crunch!
~rick
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