Naked
With pride
Beneath the music
Let’s go then
Let’s fall upon
Our backs
Until the new blooms
Return
Or even later
And to hell with them
Let’s
And dance
And not move
Beneath the music
Your hands in my chest
Let’s
With the nightingales
That declare and admit
As they fly
And on branches rest
To place our nest
Let’s
Beneath the music
And the chain
That joins the clock
To the hours
Will break
Let’s …
So it seems
All say
There is nothing else to live
But this
What else!
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19 comments:
You make me think of lying in a hammock all night awake, but dreaming, looking up, letting me make sense of the night sky, the endless night long. I like this poem.
Secretia
Woohoo, Dulce's blog is back to normal and I can comment!
I like this, especially the second stanza. :-)
Here am I with Dulce, Secretia, and Fireblossom
Such as I feel in the center of the three witches? Oh my! The timelessness of it all...
"the chain
That joins the clock
To the hours
Will break
Let's..."
I like also..."And to hell with them"...that's the spirit, Dulce!
It's me---crazy steveroni, saying "Hello" to you Peeps. Thank you Dulce, Ms wordsmythe, or is it Wonder Woman?
Hugs, and more, my F.R.I.E.N.D.
Beautifully written!
keep dancing...
aaaaah, let's indeed!
Love is so free in this expression
wooo..awesome thoughts and poetry indeed
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there you go, again - and again, dulce!
let's dance Dulce!!! Un millón de besos!!!
Beautiful, I love it!
Wll done and so lyrical!
not sure if it was intentional, but i love the subtext behind 'your hands in my chest' ... an illusion of visual connection
Music always brings her beautiful melodies and sorrows and affections needed to move the heart. A big hug, congratulations. That the past have pretty yesterday.
Let's...and to hell with them! lol
Una belleza, como siempre.
The nightingale's song, the clock chiming, the music playing (I was so curious of hearing it...). The perfect environment. Beautiful.
You've captured the perfect rhythm in this poem. Beautiful!
I came over from Fireblossom's blog. :-)
SOOO sweet these comments
Thank you all for this...
mmmm...love the idea of nightingales delaring. Lovely ~rick
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