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Monday, February 15

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Naked
With pride
Beneath the music

Let’s go then
Let’s fall upon
Our backs
Until the new blooms
Return
Or even later
And to hell with them

Let’s
And dance
And not move
Beneath the music
Your hands in my chest

Let’s
With the nightingales
That declare and admit
As they fly
And on branches rest
To place our nest

Let’s
Beneath the music
And the chain
That joins the clock
To the hours
Will break

Let’s …
So it seems
All say
There is nothing else to live
But this
What else!
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19 comments:

Anonymous said...

You make me think of lying in a hammock all night awake, but dreaming, looking up, letting me make sense of the night sky, the endless night long. I like this poem.

Secretia

Fireblossom said...

Woohoo, Dulce's blog is back to normal and I can comment!

I like this, especially the second stanza. :-)

steveroni said...

Here am I with Dulce, Secretia, and Fireblossom

Such as I feel in the center of the three witches? Oh my! The timelessness of it all...

"the chain
That joins the clock
To the hours
Will break

Let's..."

I like also..."And to hell with them"...that's the spirit, Dulce!

It's me---crazy steveroni, saying "Hello" to you Peeps. Thank you Dulce, Ms wordsmythe, or is it Wonder Woman?

Hugs, and more, my F.R.I.E.N.D.

Alexandra MacVean said...

Beautifully written!

Brian Miller said...

keep dancing...

Shadow said...

aaaaah, let's indeed!

JStar said...

Love is so free in this expression

Dr. Tripat Mehta said...

wooo..awesome thoughts and poetry indeed

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GYPSYWOMAN said...

there you go, again - and again, dulce!

SILVIA said...

let's dance Dulce!!! Un millón de besos!!!

Miss Angie said...

Beautiful, I love it!

Wait. What? said...

Wll done and so lyrical!

Kay said...

not sure if it was intentional, but i love the subtext behind 'your hands in my chest' ... an illusion of visual connection

El Drac said...

Music always brings her beautiful melodies and sorrows and affections needed to move the heart. A big hug, congratulations. That the past have pretty yesterday.

Ileana said...

Let's...and to hell with them! lol

Una belleza, como siempre.

Sylvia said...

The nightingale's song, the clock chiming, the music playing (I was so curious of hearing it...). The perfect environment. Beautiful.

Vesper said...

You've captured the perfect rhythm in this poem. Beautiful!

I came over from Fireblossom's blog. :-)

Dulçe ♥ said...

SOOO sweet these comments
Thank you all for this...

Rick said...

mmmm...love the idea of nightingales delaring. Lovely ~rick