Soft, smooth...
Gentle is the breeze
Kissing my cheeks.
Up my chin
In search for
The sweet
Surrender.
Bringing back that peace
From the sea.
Deep awareness
Reminds me of
How weak
I can get to be.
No surrender
No loose
Only to my knees...
So as to ask
That sublime higher ease
I must remain
Like this
Tender
At the peak.
Gentle is the breeze
Kissing my cheeks.
Up my chin
In search for
The sweet
Surrender.
Bringing back that peace
From the sea.
Deep awareness
Reminds me of
How weak
I can get to be.
No surrender
No loose
Only to my knees...
So as to ask
That sublime higher ease
I must remain
Like this
Tender
At the peak.
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HEY Today is FRIDAY!
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-Man ( Mr Knowitall)> The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
Shame mine has 57...
30 comments:
Something Weird happened... I had to re post this at work!
SORRY
Oh so tender :)
Believe me... no apology necessary.
Your words always make me think. Wonderful poetry. Your blog is a must :)
Fifty Five of your beautiful words fills my soul this Friday!
Hope this is the best day you ever had.
Secretia
Lovely post. Gentle writing.
more and more i am loving to read you ......
you're cathing me .
ah the breeze that kisses, the surrender so near,
peace sublime...
the total package :)
how tender
at the peak...
warmed through and through this time
Sweet and gentle. Nicely done.
You'll find mine here.
Surrender--I love that word, not in the sense of capitulate, but in another way.
Maybe how a little child accepts what is happening around it, embracing fully any tenderness, caring, love, which must certainly be always happening.
Shhhhhhh (whispering)....although that photo does not look exactly like "little children" playing!
Peace. Love.
How weak or strong we can get to be.
Estas 55 me encantan.
Besos:)
I love the softness of this piece! Don't worry, mine is a 103 this week :)
Surrender. Tender.
All this exemplifies love.
Lovely read.
Joy always,
Susan
simply adorable.
Yes I was about to say.. wait... dajavoo! ha I love it todays just as much as yesterday.
Loveliness
Oh good, I can comment now!
I so love this!
Beautiful writing, Dulce!
Have a lovely and loving Valentine's day.
Shall be visiting you again when I get back from San Francisco.
Oh, I am excited to be going on this romantic little getaway with hubby!
Shall miss all your beautful posts!
Take care and smile for all the beauty in your life!
Margie:)
xo
This poem has a very dulcet feel to it, from start to finish. Wonderful write Dulce..
Extraordinário efeito de força e fragilidade. Que lindo poema!
Sometimes... surrender is the only way... the right way. Lovely words from a tender spirit. I wish you a lovely Valentine's, Dulce! ;-)
Nevine
it felt like a sandy beach with a slight breeze and the smell and tast of salty waves...
nicely done and in only 55!
Truly lovely, Dulce, just like you - beautiful and fearless!
Psssst.
(I don't always count)
Dulce...You take my breath away!
You are such a Class Act.
Thank You for gracing these pages with your fantastic talent.
It's an honour reading the brilliance of your mind.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G-Daddy!
Tender & Sweet!
You always say so much in just 55 words. :)
Cuando la leo sólo entiendo algunas palabras de cada verso, y se va formando una brisa suave dentro del corazón, una brisa que me trae en silencio como los ecos sordos de su canción. Un beso. Si no me entendió I'll say I love to poet in your heart (amo a la poeta que hay en su corazón) is ok?
Sweet, tender and honest as usual. You have such a way with words, Chica. Me inspiras cada vez que te visito.
Perfect match of words, feeling and photo.
Such a special poem - I love "bringing back that peace from the sea" - how often I have known that.
A very gentle, sweet poem.
I think this is the sexiest 55 I've read.
Purdie Pyrate
Dulce-you make surrender sound so nice. Chins, too. Love this as usual. ~rick
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