Our love has flowered
With our sweet words
Our lust
Loose, unique
You say
Red is the rose
Must be
For that you state
I love you more and more
With each day of living
Walk on my shore
And cry no more
Smitten
By each other’s charms
We rant for everything
And nothing
I want you to get nearer
Oh please, don’t
Please closer
So many wishes
In our souls
Hold onto me
For life
We are one
But we are two
Too
I don’t want to seduce you
Too much
But I do
I don’t want us to leave it
All behind
But I do
I don’t want you to need
My presence by your side
Don’t want you to crave
For my smell, my sex,
My charms
But I do
I don’t need a commitment
Not so many compliments
But I do
I don’t want to believe
You’ve got an opportunity
Next to me
Kissing me
Whenever, wherever
You please
But I do
I don’t want to lose my freedom
But I do
I want to keep being
All by myself
My chosen solitude
My self in myself
No need to share
But I don’t.
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17 comments:
Wow! What an absolutely stunning use of words! Sad, but not sad! Loved it.
great words, dulce! loved this!!!
and thanks so much for always having such nice words at my place! have a great day!
great tension created in teh contrasts...a bit torn. smiles.
I love the contrast in this girl...It’s JUST how our brain works when not trying to fall in love or need someone...The indecisiveness of back and forth...Wanting and craving but then your mind has something to say as well...
Great poem. I can't help diving in these conflicts. So it is love... All a contradiction. Supreme.
well done. you can feel the tug of war ...
just love stopping by. everytime i read your words i am engulfed with gushy thoughts of my own sweetie.
we cannot burst from within extolling the revelations of love, and keep quiet at the same time,
what a dynamic tension you have proclaimed!
i love it Dulce -
Sublime, querida Dulce. pero que lindo escribes cielo. Un besazo!!!
I do
I don't
I will
I won't
So what am I going to do? (A song.)
In English, "Have my cake and eat it also".
Sweetest poet, you WILL find your way to happiness.
Love.
So filled with the contradictions and warring emotions we feel when we love. Your words are beautiful, and perfectly measured, Dulce. Yum!
Nevine
Makes complete sense to me. Why is it that men find women confusing, anyway?
damned if we do, damned..love the push me pull me thing. not as much as...well, you know. Excellent enticement here. ~rick
This is a fine expression of contentment and satisfaction with the way your love is. Love is best like that, when it tingles like fine ice crystals on skin.
What a gifted poet you are!
Secretia
the strength of love in this poem pulls me right into it and reminds me of the dance of love...of passion...of purpose. ☺
Dulce, te dejo un abrazo grande:)
Don´t you believe me when I say that you are marvellous?
I do;)
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