No,
I won’t tell them
You left
Nobody should know
Cause my soul
Still touches your presence.
No,
I can’t tell them
You left
And that your decision,
Just one,
Is not like mine,
A tag of war.
Yes,
I’ll hide from them
And manage to pretend
You are still by my side...
...Smelling the flowers
Of my garden
So bright
Now blossoming in the night.
Yes,
From those I’ll hide
Who with me celebrated
For my soul can’t ignore
But lure your presence.
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26 comments:
Had to add word verification...sorry.
I hope that prevents those spammers from gettting in! (?)
Have a nice weekend ALL of you MY DEAR Friends!
And remember
A poem is just a poem...
Dulce
Sad, but, oh, so lovely!
is it denial...or just hope that one clings to? i like to think hope; followed by a happy-ever-after (i have always been a dreamer). well done.
hey there lady dulce! finally making it over afer being so side tracked lately - love this piece of yours, as i do all your others - about the new town new home thing - i've certainly been there, done that! my thoughts with you!!!
That was an intensely personal message in your poem! An important one.
Secretia
Oh, yes. A poem is just a poem. But never just a poem with you, Dulce. A beautiful poem, in this case. A perfect way to begin the weekend, I say! ;-)
Nevine
Beautiful. He should come to you and say: "No, you're wrong! I didn't leave... " Like in that song, Lara Fabian.
If your poem is based on reality, it makes me sad for you!
Hope it's fiction.
But well done on the writing!
Have a good weeeknd, Dulce.
Margie :)
"My soul still touches your presence..." Que triste y romantico a la misma vez.
I love it.
Oooah.
Word verification--well, that just lost ME as a follower--BIG GRIN!
DD your writing simply gets better and better. And I'm not the only one to say that...
"Inquiring Minds Can't Be Wrong"
Seriously, this one is a winner!
Take Care
I still feel her Soul standing by mine:)
And it cheers me up when I feel down:)
One kiss from my Soul, Sweetie:)
longing and tears is what i feel...
i always love the cadence of your work. best read aloud...
peace.
good morning sweet one. So sorry I have been away. Thanks for caring.
Funny this poem seems fitting with how I am feeling and what I wrote.
souls are deep so deep once we find that soul mate. I love the smelling of your gardens , so bright, blossoming in the night.
SIGH LOVES SHINES
LOVE YOU BE WELL
HUGS N KISSESS
The photo, the photo. It is such a descriptive to your post of missing he who has left again
My trouble, I don't know where to be sad for you or happy. So i'll be me.
Have a feeling he'll be back...
Very nice!
You're just amazing at producing these incredible poems Dulce!
Have a nice weekend!
Unos versos intensos amiga mía. Y bellos. El amor siempre es una de cal y otra de arena. pero eso es lo bello, no? Besitos!!!
Beautiful and yes, sad poem. I have lived this too often...(tears)
Tis a bit sad today...especially after the previous post.
El amor no sabe de tiempo y espacio, igual que los poemas.
Buen domingo!!
PD:No entendí lo del viento, por aquí no hay.. cosa rara..
Besos:)
La imagen..ufffff tremenda!!
+ Besos:)
shame...understand that so well. you say so much with so few words. ☺
This is so well written and I can definitely relate to what you have expressed. Splitting up is a painful process... it just takes time.
one thing I've learned, Dulce. A poem is just a poem unless someone says it's just a poem. Then it's something more. Take care~rick
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