Such is the rainbow
Not a dream.
He asks her to forgive
His temporary absence
His sudden grieve.
And he kisses her cry
With such concern
Such heed, so precise.
His lips so sweet
Go slowly down
Towards her knees
How he loves that inside
That between...
That she cannot understand
Perhaps
Because she does not see
As he tastes
But oh how she feels….
And titillates.
Such is his charm
Not a dream.
That’s when her cry
Becomes her smile
His veneration
So kind,
So alive
They could die
And would not mind.
That’s when they celebrate
Their harmony
Their peace
Immortality.
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32 comments:
His love is healing her heart...So pure and so true...I love it Dulce , as always :)
What a sweet moment to get lost in.
Lovely, as ever :)
I know that sweet feeling of "die and would not mind...". Blissful, Dulce! I love your erotic poetry.
Nevine
i like , more than everything , the end :
celebrate , harminy , peace , imortality .
always a pleasure to stop by and read your work, great post here.
You must be trying to make me get my vibrator out, it's getting hot in this room!
Secretia
ok ok you win
now knock it off cause your going to get me into trouble if you have a tracker thing that tells how long I've been here
Your writings seem to be linked . . .the pain, the forgiveness and now the reconciliation. I hope the girl does not lose herself in the eternal game of love-lust-forgiveness-pleasure's vicious circle.
It was indeed lovely to read the lines. Temperature soared as the lines progressed.
Joy always,
Susan
Wait a minute, from the perspective you wrote from it should only appeal to other women, never mind I don't think I understand one dulce.
can you explain why a man would find this post driving him insane?
beautiful...like sweet music...
what a kind and gentle and giving lover...
You make me blusheth!
WOW!
You sure can write erotic.
Have a great day!
Margie:)
xx
oooo. wow. love it.
Always love your writing. :)
There must be truth in that she who writes erotic, must be erotic.
And Dulce, consider fortunate this man, who has found his way home once more. This man who so precisely titillates, venerates, celebrates, in harmony and peace. Ohhhhhh! You have me living in your life, Sweetness!
I say "No..no more". And yet, I want more!
Hugs and kisses, my Dear.
sizzling ...
so wonderfully intimate. i have come to expect that here. thank you.
Sensual, pasional, romantico,
excelente tu texto, un placer leerte, feliz semana.
un beso.
Very romantic with a good twist of eroticism. Written with such a calmness to it, you get lost in the words... Beautifully done..
A prelude to Valentine's Day.
Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Blissful indeed! ...complete with celebration!
So absolutely romantic! I felt a chill down my spine... Of delight.
your poetry is really good Dulce. This came into my email and I thought of you. Not sure you would be interested but I think you stand a great chance. If you submit....routing for you. Sarah
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Dulce- you're such a master at knowing what to leave out. Never any fat or hiccups. Yes, that inside. I understand his drive. The second to the last stanza was so good and powerful I would have ended it there. That's them laying in the mess. the love. The last lines are the shower. The clean up. I didn't want things tidy in this one. I can almost smell it. ~rick
I believe in inmortality when it is related to LOVE:)
Much love to you, sweetie. And two kisses;)
Such is his charm
Not a dream.
so pure and fresh as dew and longlasting as fragrance in a fresh rose :)
cheers!
http://sparkledaroma.blogspot.com/
cause you've got that loven felling, ohhhhhhhh...ha! some sensual lovin going on here!
Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? ;)
¡Esta buenisimo, Chica!
erotic and spiritual, that is
a beautiful talent.
Whoa! Willy done got warm reading that one.
10-4 Willy
Mmm...sensual and romantic. This
poem read like a short flick.
I love your erotic poetry.
Work from home India
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