Here is where our seeds
Were sown
Ever since
Growing just with the feel
Of one another
And no other
Here is where I’ve been
Ever since
Diving in these
Transparent waters
Where
A single drop of blood
Clouds this whole ocean
We so contentiously created
That very moment
We happened to meet
Ever since...
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© Dulce
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37 comments:
As to what this 55 words mean, I can only guess. Such is the prison of the non-poet. Always wondering, always guessing. Never knowing for sure what is, or what is not.
I do love your blog posts, and their accompanying pictures, Dulce.
And I believe every moment, even in the past, is now, right here, right now, forever, always, eternity.
I will return. Cannot stay away.
Very Nice Dulce as always. I like the poem I look forward to reading you again.
I'm posted also just follow the link provided below.
The Villan
I loved this 55 "ever since" I happened upon it!
It was the time that the first bit of light from the morning sunrise touched the forest floor...
Dulce.....beautiful as always. Just beautiful.
Mine's HERE. Scroll down below my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55.
Have a great weekend.
Ever since...
ahhh delightful!
beautifully done...ever since...smiles.
Stunning words and the imagery that is evoked. As always, beautiful 55 Dulce.
I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Checkmate
Your love walks above the oceans waters and deep into your heart...Beautiful 55 Dulce! Check mine out :)
i loved your pictures here... now to dive into that ocean.
Aw, love is like that. Beautiful 55, dear Dulce!
such powerful words, "ever since..."
lovely, as always,
warm smiles,
"ever since"...a delicate, gentle sweetness...love this!
hugs girl and have a fab weekend~ xo
Calli
i think this is just a beautiful 55. you have such a gift with words and you articulate these wonderful feelings and blend thoughts together so well.
Beautifully done!
You are soooo good at 55!
Have a great weekend, Dulce.
Be happy!!!
Margie:)
xo
lovely as always.
Beautifully written, as always your words make me think. :)
Oo.
I like this one.
Es precioso!! y esa gota que lo representa todo, lo relativo de lo breve, del tiempo..
Happy weekend!!
Besos:)
A lovely 55 that defines exactly how a relationship becomes its own world, its own entity. Very nice, Sweetest! And have a beautiful weekend. :-)
Nevine
Dulce...
How lucky we all are to be graced by your wonderful talent.
And It's free!!
Excellent 55 My Dear.
Thank You for playing today, You Rock not only the Canary Islands, but the Lesser Antilles as well!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G-Daddy
i think it is really hard to do a 55 .
but you .... you're not fair . in just 55 you make me go out and look for her .
not fair .
haqve a lovely weekend "doce " girl .
Oh G man... LOL
The Antilles? where the hell is that???
So far away from here!
Yours are always the best comments-
thanks!
...and Have a Kick Ass Week-End too!
Thanks CIAO
And all the rest of you lovely friends
You are sooooo very nice to this my blog, such an important part of meself!...
Lots of love!
Love comes ALIVE on your blog, Chica! You know all about it. :)
I love your ability to capture the uncapturable.
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I liked this for reasons that words would fail to do justice to. I can't compete with your lovely prose :)
I'm up right HERE
Sounds wonderful,lovely prose :)
Really touching :)
D-I love swimiing in your drop of blood. And I love your 55! ~rick
Hi Dulce, "where a single drop of
bloof clouds the whole ocean"...
the power of certain essences
are remarkable.
I feel a pain beneath this poem,
and a kind of wondering.
a single drop clouds the whole ocean.
i love this concept, and the reality of how it is reflected in our human connectedness...
Very Goood Dulce!
Also I write poems.. I look forward to hearing from you..
Best wishes from turkey
aslan
This one makes me think - plant - cultivate - harvest.
I like the thoughts behind this one.
Kindest regards,
Tom Bailey
Sounds like a perfect match!
I do love your blog posts, and their accompanying pictures,
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