This love…
It seems and said it is
And I truly believe
For it must be
The more intellectual
And intelligent you become
The more that love grows within
Might seem impossible
But I truly believe
For there I’ve been
A mixture of frustration
And hope
A hope to find in that person
Every single thing
Even more than you need
Actually just through fantasy
Invention
Creativity
That perfection
One always seeks
Sweeter than just sweet
A need to have the ideal
No need to go through it
In reality.
So stimulating this feeling is
Because as you think and feel
As you feel and think
No witness comes to play
So you can give free rein
To your imagination
This love…
Has
No agreements or disagreements
No arguments
No dirty details
It doest not get old
For it’s out of time and space
This love…
Is not moody
But clean
Pure
Always loose
No limits
No nuances…
No censorship allowed…
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Written for >One Shot Wednesday (Poetry In Motion) Go take part!
34 comments:
Ironic that just today I was pondering Platonic philosophy and mentioned it to one such friend.
It takes some time, some juggling and balance, perhaps a few winding roads... but it's possible.
Beautiful words of yours. thank you.
CR
Love your analysis....this is beautiful! :-)
gla dto see you at one shot dulce! i wonder if any love ever lives without disagreements...perhaps love is shown best when we are still in the midst of it and can call it love....
first, i get MORE than platonic from the picture you chose - not complaining, however.
the poem, itself, weaves a delightful dance through the tempting and pleasant evolution of this wonderful way of loving. i'm fortunate to have several with whom i share this and now that you have reminded me - i must thank them.
thank you!
A beautifully reflective and subtly layered poem, Dulce, the philosophical searing at its core is wonderful. Platonic love is, indeed, the noblest of all love and you so elegantly articulate this. It is the love of human for another, simply and only because they are both human.
Thank you for posting. I always enjoy explorations of love and each is as unique as the love to whom it belongs. Thanks for posting this. Gay
Hand in hand without the sparks. Great One Shot.
Glad to have you Dulce at One Shot
This love transcends even platonic love - does it exist?? maybe in the mind
Delightful my friend
Moon smiles
Platonic love always seems so uncomplicated. I enjoyed this exploration.
WOW..dulceeee..love seeing you here! it is totally mind blowing this piece,the photo ..i have it from elsewhere,inspiring as hell..ah,now one shot is only getting better and better ha! big hug :)))
I agree....
Sex Ruins Everything!!
A true systematic poetic study this one. Dulce, you are investigating a concept. This love. Far out! This love. "Out of time and space".
I cannot know--for me--if this kind of love, with no pain, no guilt, no hurt, no jealousy, no furiosity and no breaking someone's heart now and then--clean, pure blah blah...is possible. Just never thought of it.
If this is not your BEST ever blog, it is certainly your most interesting. Here IS another point of view, NOT mine:
Samuel Richardson has one of his characters in "PAMELA" say, "I am convinced, and always was, that Platonic love is Platonic nonsense."
Remember I did NOT say that--grin! just threw it into the mix. Enjoyable read, WELL done
and the image...well, ahh, Ummm! YEP!
HUGS!
Happy first school day today!
An intriguing analysis. Thanks for this.
All the best, Boonie
I am happy that you are keeing 'sweeter love' alive in a despondent world! thanks for sharing...
Isnt this the best kinda love Dulce :)
i loved the poem and am enjoying reading the comments....perhaps as time passes with someone we slip into this feeling anyway..cheers pete
I love reading poems and finding your blog is such a treat. I will come back to read your old ones with a cup of tea and a lone time...
I love this piece. I don't say that often. As a hyper intelligent longing for love man this resonates with what I hope love is. Unfortunately it has not been my experience. Has it been this way for you? Platonic or otherwise? Bisous, Love and Light, Sender
This love is a beautiful dream. Nice one.
For the love of Plato? (LOL!)
I wish everyone could express their platonic love as well.
It sounds like a good love too! Though I disagree with my love but that is how she and I balance out, and in balancing, we love:)
Great work here Dulce!
this is love at it finest...and you express it beautifully..nice to meet you too at One Shot..bkm
No censorship allowed…that would be great - but i wonder if it does not sneak in - even in platonic love affairs…
enjoyed your how beautiful you describe it in your poem dulce!
Sounds like a love we should all have. You did a lovely job describing all its qualities. But to go a bit irreverent, the wrench in the works is lust. The minute your bring that into the equation, many of those qualities go to hell in a hand basket.
ohh love the last line! this, agape love...
sometimes this is the best kind of love...I agree with Emily about that last line...☺
Nice poem, Dulce! That is an ideal love. Great poem,indeed..beautifully written.
I'm your newest follower on this site, too!
B :)
Nonsense. I want both the delight and the dirt.
I love your description of Pure love. The way it's written lured me to beliving that this Love does exist and is there for all to share and experience. Thanks for sharing. Donusho
an alluring vision...
warm smiles,
This really is love in the purest of forms.. no questions asked, no answers ever needed!
Such a lovely poem... the words gave me goosebumps... cuz I really believe (know) that such a love does exist!
Thanks for reassuring my belief, my friend, and for sharing this piece here...
I revel in such kind of platonic love, lovely lines and well written Dulce~
Platonic...the strongest love I have ever felt, the sweetest way I ever loved.
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