Monday, August 23
LOVELY
Lovely is that smile
So bright
You can’t avoid despite
A deep and bitter grief
Working hard on it
Essential
Vital
Unique
Lovely is
When I can have you by my side
Lovely is
The night
And your eyes
When as blue as the sky
Lovely is that you
Inspire me to write
Pleasing
Exquisite
Adorable
Full of love despite my own
Giving me as I take
From every single thing
That surrounds my self.
It’s then that I make love
To anything that inspires
Gentleness
Tenderness
Sweetness
It is the view and swim
In this sea
It’s the sun as it sets
It is both
Like you and me
Or just me
And all the rest
Of those so lovely
Splendid
Life's little gifts…
_______________________________________________Deviantart Image>Water hand by Stardust 626
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19 comments:
Let this be the last one of the series.
Thanks my dear friends for your so sweet comments always!
xoxox
D.
even through the dark of night there is a beam of hope....
love
I loved the series but then time for change I guess. Life's little gifts as Dulce's poems are ever so lovely and beautiful :)
Love and happiness to you always.
Joy and peace,
Susan
loevly indeed dulce...life little moments, some lovely and others...but then comes the next...
Simply LOVELY, it is one of my favorite words, even if not a manly, macho word.
In the word lovely, I detect the word love, great detective that i am--grin!
LOVELINESS, as well as JOY, can exist in and in spite of "...deep and bitter grief..." because lovely means loving and full of love!
JOY-because NMW (No Matter What) I still am able to praise the Creator, who has set everything in motion (to achieve a final perfection), even
"...those so lovely
Splendid
Life's little gifts..."
Dulce, this is SO beautifully and profoundly thought and written.
And the image, the hand trying to feel, touch something which is not there, lovely in it's grief.
WOW! (Is how I see it, anyway.)
Thank you once more...Sweetest Poet.
Love,
"South Carolina Man" today!
This is just "Lovely" :)
Dulce this is beautiful as always.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
:-)
Certainly beautiful :)
To say something different:
Que encanto!!! Un beso.
Lovely :)
¡Que lindo canto al amor!
Un beso enorme querida amiga!!!
Lovely... is this write... and lovely... was this series. You know I enjoyed it, yeah? Yes, you know. And you know you are one of "life's little gifts", too. Though you are not quite a little gift, Dulce, but a gift that is grand... and keeps giving.
Nevine
"Life's little gifts" - yes! Beautiful, Dulce, touching, true and beautiful. In a few words, you strike a chord of emotion within us all, this wonderful poem read like a mesmerising love sonnet :)
Una belleza...a muse for a muse. I adore it, prima! Que pena que no hay más (?).
we're on the road...away from home...read this early this morning...everyone's still sleeping....it made me smile..it feels so beautiful...I look at my family and know...the love I have been given...I'll do anything for them. Take gentle care Dulce...You're the best....
This was dreamy and I need to return to read what I have missed.
I felt each word, each thought as if these were my own. Eyes so blue...I know those and love them ;)
Life's little gifts...YOU!
love you sweetest~
Calli
Hey YOU!!
Sir Tomas, Love expert
Susan, lovely woman...
Brian, lovely follower
Stevest!, sweetest loveliest peep! ;)
Jstar, sweetest heart..
Carrie, lovely lady..
Thom, aloha love..
Silvia, Spanish Amorcito..
Champ, :)
Nevine, my queen of greatest loves..
Sam, wisest lovely guy
Sylvia, oh lovely Sylvia!
Sarah = 'love'
Ily, lovely primita
Calli, lovely twin,sister, friend,...lovely etc, etc... ;)
My dear friends you are SO very SWEET to me..
Your words really embellish me with love and even pride... I can't help it but love you!
You are my real inspiration.
That's for sure!
Sweet Hugs
;)
Dulce
This is a bright and cheerful poem, Dulce, very positive...we all need this once in awhile to illuminate the shadows and keep us hoping.
That's really lovely poem. I can feel each and every word of the poem.. Lovely!!!
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