That day will come
When no roses nor chocolate
Will make for it…
Your vain promises
Will go with the wind…
Too many years
Same lies…
That day will come
When I’ll be able
Not to open the door
Or answer the phone
No tears to fall…
…Let you go
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Deviantart Image: The End Of Every Story by Eaven
35 comments:
so bittersweet and beautifully empowering. great 55
Dump him gal, where's your spirit!To hear or read my Friday 55 click here
That day will come
when one realises that life can go on
no matter what
with or without . . .
life goes on
A poignant 55!
Joy always and a splendid weekend dear Dulce.
~ Susan
This is quite beautiful. Thanks.
All the best, Boonie
It's a shame when it gets to that point...but it can and does and we just have to go on and in the end live better and love better and not wallow it the sadness of that particular demise.
Love can take us on many a roller coaster ride, Twin :)
that day will come...when the tears are done...and life is fresh once more...nice 55.
If that day comes, you will know you have loved, shared love, given all your love, and you will be able to smile and love that person more by letting him go.
HUGS TO YOU My FRIEND
I like the inner strength in this, Dulce. There's an awareness here that a better choice will be made.
You have captured here so beautifully how hard it is to let go, even when you know it's good for you xx
sounds like the door should be closed right now... no one should be right there at that point....
Some things (or people) are best let go of. Nice 55.
Don't wait. Do it now. He sounds like he'd be best gone. Very poignant 55.
Sooo... Why wasting precious time? Hugs.
oh i once had a relationship like this - and knew it should come to an end - but it was so difficult to go… heartbreaking 55!
Dulce, I understand these words all too much! You have to be in that place to truly understand the hold and pain that it has. I hope that the future holds much happiness for you.
:-) You deserve it!!!
I believe that this is fiction.
No one in their right mind would treat you this way.
Excellent 55 Dulce.
Welcome back..
Thanks for playing so sadly, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
After finding your blog, via G-Man's 55 meme, I decided to Follow.
I see you also have a photo blog. As a fellow photo buff, I'd like to be considered for an invitation please, if possible.
I also have a photo blog, which you're more than welcome to see: Bifocal Univision
"That day will come, when I will hang up." And that is what I used to say... to myself... when I was sick of the lies... the same, yes... but always with the attempt at making them different. There is always a day at the end of every night, and that is the way it is.
So good to read your quiet words, Dulce. So good to feel the gentle ripple like breath on skin.
Here's to a weekend without bitter chocolate or poisoned roses!
Hugs,
Nevine
Make that day come soon. Suffering is not fun and carrying a resentment is like taking poison and expecting the other person to die. Great 55.
such a sweetly poignant poem...Great Job!
Y cuando llegue, cesarán las lágrimas y amanecerán de nuevo las sonrisas. Un fortísimo abrazo cielo!!!
Lovely work, plenty of feelings, indeed this poem is quite poignant.
Remember to learn from experiences, neither sadness nor suffering should be welcome in your sweet heart. Absolutely amazed with your writing skills, incredible 55.
Take care sweet friend!
Been here before and when it's over it's truly done. Nicely done 55.
Mine's here
whenever I read u,
I feel like reading a romantic novel,
your words sound gentle and magical....
beautiful 55,
never allow others judge you,
u judge or define yourself,
stay cool,
I love you.
So many comments here imply this is YOU, Dulce. I do not think so.
If it were, you would probably not be able to write anything for some time...it is that strong, your passions, your love for life which has been observed here. IMO the depressions you share here are frequently not yours
Not to say these are not experienced by many peeps here and elsewhere.
"No tears to fall...
...let you go"
AMEN
Been there, or somewhere very much like it. Often easier said than done, as I recall...
Poignant 55. Nicely done.
-C
Beautiful, bittersweet, and an inner strength is found, to move past the tears, to love again, for love will come around always.
Cheers,
Joanny
Oops forgot to say I became a follower of your beautiful blog.
Joanny
I have voiced and thought those words many times in my life...but you put them to paper so well. I hope I don't ever make that lament again...as I near 66, I hope I'm home free. Not that I wouldn't mind a little romance.
Hey Dulce, who follows now will be number 300. You are climbing the ladder to 1,000. Congratulations to you and to whoever is "next"....
Dulce, nu skall du få en svensklektion ;) Låt dörren bli STÄNGD och säg goodbye!!
Thanx for nice comment on my blog & please be my guest in my new contest!
Agneta
You've summed up what I have felt on two many occasions...
going going gone... it's all fading in the distance
I must say there is an intensity in your poetry. I just loved the depth.. I am just speechless
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