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Tuesday, August 18

AWAKENING





Tired eyes encounter

Cauliflower clouds

A brightness sparkling

The idea

Leading to the white flowers

Those waves

As they break

This still winter,

Peaceful backwater

Cold beach

Sated with stillness

And flushness

As I breathe this eternal

Agony

For being alive

And at the sea

Gaze

Less tired now

My arms filled

With this awakening

The encounter…

Grief for Death

and the dead

And a fear

Of the beyond

Of the farthest

No-

Of the nearest.

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© Dulce

13 comments:

steveroni said...

You know, Dulce, an old man should not be reading this stuff--but it is so beautiful.

Is winter just ending in the Canaries? Or maybe you are somewhere else. Never mind, none of my business, right? -grin!

Anyway...PEACE!

Rikkij said...

I love how it ends. A poem of excitement and fear from far away and suddenly, it is just beside you. very nice. ~rick

Unknown said...

The Awakening... what does it mean to you?

Love your poetry... I will be following.

Sue

Anonymous said...

Sometimes we just need something special to wake up because when we are not aware, anything can happen.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Thank you for your nice comments, everyone.

Dear Steve,
It’s not winter in the Canaries. As far as I know, its summer everywhere above the Equator.
This poem I wrote originally in Spanish in 1997. Yesterday I translated it into English… HARD WORK! Never again… And as a translation it’s never exactly the same as in its original language… well -but it seems you’ve captured the idea… That’s great.

Shadow said...

'sated with stillness' now that i love!

Hootin Anni said...

My goodness...there is beauty in your words...along with so many emotions. Love how it ends.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Dear Sue,
“What does awakening mean to yme?”
I think it’s a bit paradoxical. For it’s clear She is not happy, but afraid… Afraid of realizing what is near is not beautiful any more- so she wakes up from the dream of the young and starts seeing life as adults do (?)
Anni
Thank you so much for your words...
Shadow
I came up to 'sated' in my dictionary and said: 'This will do', funny you like it...
Thank you

Unknown said...

oh my... sounds like you're writing about me (awakening). But even though I'm awake, I feel practically comotose.

Love blog so I subscribed.

Sue

Unknown said...

Hey Friend!

I added the followers on my blog. And if you want to see what blogs I follow, you can see them on my profile :)

I wonder why my pic isn't coming up when I follow a blog :(
Sue

Sylvia said...

That's the Winter of the heart. I hope Spring comes soon. The bond with the sea is marvellous.

Dr.John said...

Interesting and thought provoking.

Michelle said...

Is that your art work?

It is lovely and moving...